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Review of Little Kisses  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was just amazing. I love the way you wrote this Moesha. I'm not sure if you have a child or not but this warmed my heart and made me feel really bad. I feel so sorry for this child, he deserves a father in his life, but thank god that he has a wonderful mother in his life to provide and take care of him. I have mad respect for whoever this poem was about.
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Review of 5 Sense Poem  Open in new Window.
Review by Jessica Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this. I love how you it was so tense when I read this poem. I also love the way the poem was formed. It was a great way to keep the poem clear. and not let anyone get confused by it. My favorite line was, "The vengence of whip torturing to death with a hateful heart." It was such a beatutiful line to me for some reason. Great job !
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Review of Bubble Guts  Open in new Window.
Review by Jessica Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Haha this poem was funny but disturbing at the same time. I liked the form that the poem was written in. I wouldn't have chose to write a poem about farts but this was hilarious. You had a very good choice of words though.
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Review of Forever  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. The choice of words were amazing. I can relate to this so well, forever is just a word. My favorite line was, "Our friends come and go. Our nights turn to day. Our laughs turn to tears. Nothing can ever stay."

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Review of Bully  Open in new Window.
Review by Jessica Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem is beautiful. Even though it is short and sweet it has alot of meaning to it. The poem is very insperational and I enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Restless  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This poem is really good. It shows alot of emotion in it. Its really sad at the same time though. I wouldn't have wrote a poem about death but some people feel different then I do. Overall this poem was amazing, the choice of words were good and I really liked it.
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Review of Holding me back  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to this poem so well. It may be a bit depressing but when I read this poem I felt alot of tention. I understand how this author feels and I can also understand how it feels to feel so along and not to have anyone but knowing you really do is the worst. I know exactly how it feels to want something in life so much but you know it'll never work because of the things that you have done in your past.
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Review by Jessica Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This poem is really good and has a nice choice of words. My favorite line of this poem was "Rebuked by the beautiful." I don't know why, but it just was. I also loved how this poem was organized and the first word had the true meaning of the poem.
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