A poem about a cartoon:) Ah the many cartoon styles, your descriptions make me realize the styles that I know. I can't help but feel that you described the western style and the japanese style anime with the wide eyes. So do you mean the old cartoons don't seem real?
I only watched one Sailormoon series, yeah everything is pretty much repetitive and usually they outnumber the enemies all the time. It was funny on some scenes though and not so bad. Anyway I tried answering the quiz, though I'm not too confident of my results:)
This is wonderful. I admit some words just came to me but some of them I needed to use the internet. But it was still fun. Good work. I love it. Though I admit that the clues are ok and very well made. You clearly did good research, well done. I barely heard of some of the terms but they all seem like classics
Wow you really expressed your thoughts out loud. This is very good, just like the mind of a philosopher. The complexity of the human mind is very intriguing indeed because thoughts that are disturbing to the common man is mostly the way to discover new answers. Anyway I agree with some of your opinions, though some are debatable. It just depends on perception I guess.
Its a really depressing story but the little girl was mature enough to get back to her feet and stop believing. The ending is open for interpretation though as how would an 8 year old girl be able to make a fresh start. I mean employment anywhere is not allowed for such a young girl, so does the ending mean that she'd believe that she would be able to start anew?
This is wonderful, just wonderful. Many people, myself included is trapped in a pit we ourselves created. You might even call it an endless hell, a cycle of the same things over and over, without any purpose that would satisfy us. Our lives having no meaning and no matter what pleasures we try to soothe it with turn to ashes. I really loved how you did this, the symbol of ice in a cold lake that you did where the character is trapped in his own mind. The words really show the effect on the reader. I'm not really too much of a reader so I didn't get the woman with the blank stare?
Wow they finished the case without even leaving the room. Come to think of it, Holmes using a computer has never happened before so he I mean she would be even better if he had one. But then again the criminals just have to be smarter.
Good Job on this one, though honestly Holmes get annoying how she interrupts Watson all the time, maybe the only reason she told Watson the case was to brag to him. Anyway you made Holmes female, any connection to the original Holmes? Anyway wonderful research on the facts
The first thing that came to me when I read this is the poem is describing a girl, hidden and isolated. But then after reading two more times it came to me that poems has about half a dozen meanings, another meaning I got is the poem describing the four phases of the moon with the first two lines describing a new moon and the last lines the half moon but that's just me.
nice work on rhyming on the last words every two lines and good job on this
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