When I started to read your poem I felt like ice cold water was splashed into my face because of how open minded and cold it felt. I love the line "that brings you back to half-life". This is so because instead of bringing something back to life you brought it back to half-life. It reminds me of vampires. Only a person with an experienced and descriptive mind on romance could write an exquisite poem like this.
Your description of how a mind is capable of harnessing unique dreams every time you sleep is great.
I really enjoy the lines "Rarely 2 minds share the same talk" because its absolutely true. Also the lines "A beautiful morning indeed it is, to wake up in a world so bright" leaves me to know though haunting things may happen in your life your always, no matter what going to wake up in a bright world.
Your poem relates to the one negative action that humans bring to this beautiful and unique world which is destruction. This poem shows how nature is a strong being, much stronger then the average human. I really admire this poem for it's sense of devastation that us people make.
I really enjoyed your fantastic poem. The only thing is, is that the time I unlocked my heart to someone it ended a little to quick, but it's ok I still liked your poem.
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