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Review of The show  Open in new Window.
Review by Come as you are Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hmm...It seemed like it was too long. I mean really, it isn't long at all but just...the way the poem was set up seem like it was short, dark, and essentially to the point. Not really too dark or goth, more lovey dovey, and boring. Well Written though.

Maybe you can check out some of my dark poetry?

Nathan
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Review by Come as you are Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
Very very good detail but, not the most exciting poem. I hate to say it, but i think most of the reviews you have gotton seem to just want to suck up to you, because in my eyes at least, the poem is very detailed and very well put together, but extremely boring. This poem really doesnt bring images to my mind. I am sorry if this review isn't what you are looking for, but i always try to speak my mind.

Maybe you could take a look at some of my work?

thanks,

Nathan
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Review of -title needed-  Open in new Window.
Review by Come as you are Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Rhyming...christ i hate it...but i do like music. get a pimped band, say THE f***IN MISFITS, to play this and i would buy the f***in cd. Way better then other lyrics..keep on keepin on.
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Review by Come as you are Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I hate the song Looking through the glass by Stone sour and sadly this reminds me of the song. I mean i love the band and Slipknot but, hate the song. The descpriptions in this poem of f***ing amazing though so i will rate you better for that lil intake.
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Review of HIDE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Its neet how you reconize our polution is a way of hiding ourselves from the truth. Our our overpopulation is causing more buildings, more polution, along with more lies. That is a neet and creative connection..
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Review by Come as you are Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem seemed quite crazy and....."Retarded"..up until the last sentence, where of course you explained the poem entirely. This bit of work is quite creative and even a little funny.....makes you think....
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Review of Not the Ends  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear God man......long is all i can say. I mean its not that long, but I'm used to short, emotional stuff. Which this DOES not fit into that category. Great dude.....seriously in depth and...yet again..political in the fact of the Cuban refugees. Which i already stated that im not a big fan of. I am a fan of creativity and wording which you use as a great advantage here...by the way the 200 Gps i am sending you are because of this stories originality....i would send more but this is all i have.
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Review of Black Mamba  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
hmmm...well I liked the whole "black Mamba" essence. Alothough the poem itself seems hard to understand. I understand the mamba as death and the Stallion as goodness, but the rest of the poem seems....sadly...boring?No not boring....just...unwordful.philosophies really kicked in and i did like that, along with Tranquility. The poem itself rymes at a point...and then doesnt. I do quite understand why you did it like this, or maybe the words just came out that way. Anyway i would like to know what the meaning behind the poem is...
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