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Review of A HARD DAYS REST  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's fairly good but you're messing with detail way to much, it starts off with vague and very metaphorical detail and then goes into way to much detail, it makes the story seems like more of an awkward daze but it's not bad over all
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Review of Open Sores  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I can see the relating part but it's very run on sentence like, jumping from being made fun of to other things and then back with no real connectivity. Though it's pretty good if that's what you're going for
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Review of I Am  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It's fairly good, but it lacks a kind of flow that really connects each part and forms a bigger picture, unless that's what you're going for.
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Review of The Icemen Cometh  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Though the idea is very good, and I understand your limitations, it's very subjective and much too much of a happy go-lucky story to really convey the idea of the minuscule evolving into something greater. Not a bad story over-all though
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