Lol, this poem made me laugh. It was very funny and the fact that it rhymed through out gave it a rhythm which only made it more comedic and easier to follow. It reminds me of when I was still a young child and the rhyming only appealed to that.
Wow, this is a really deep poem which touched me. You are very good with imagery which enabled me to picture and understand the trauma you went through.
Wow, this is an absolutely beautiful poem. The different references you made enabled me to have a clearer picture of the message making it even more heartfelt.
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