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Review of REUNION  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
The short story was somewhat thought out.. The stone memorial did not make much sence until the last phrase.. You kinda understood what it was.. but still the meaning of it was a bit lost. What does the title represent really. "reunion" Is it the reunion of names who helped with the fire... A meeting of them that is going to take place... what exactly is it... Phraseing is an important detail in this story.. Good job on the tribute though..
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Sam
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Review of Secret Garden  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really enjoyed the story.. You are a good writer and I hope you will continue on it the story.. It is well thought out but you give a bit too much information in about the 13th paragraph 'Careful now, I tell myself, hoping that nothing strange or weird pops out of it' A little odd to add and you also talk about having to climb on your knees to get to the closent.. This is a confusing part of the story.. But keep up the good work...
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Sam
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