Great testimony! This poem tells the truth about the world, from line one! The message sent is one of both aggitation and aggravation, because the world, as a whole, won't listen to any kind of reason when it comes to the subject of war. My favorite line is the one that says "Rarely do the peacemakers make the rules". Great job!
Absolutely beautiful! This poem seriously made me tear up, especially the part that told about how beautiful Heaven will be! It's so good to know that those who pass on early (or even late) in this life won't have to know anymore suffering of this world, or the pain that can be inflicted in a lifetime, and this poem in particular really sends that message! Great work, God bless!
Not bad at all! This descriptive short story grabbed my attention straight away and held me bound until the end, when I dropped my jaw at the final scene. Great work, and it's a shame that it is only a short story, as it leaves a bit more to be desired (too much of a cliff hanger! Definitely need more elaboration on the back story!)
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