The premise is really interesting, but it would be better if we knew what genre the characters in the story would about. Maybe the genre could influence their personality? Also maybe put more detail into how exactly they got out? Those are just nitpicky critiques about the plot, though. It's overall pretty good.
I like the fairytale-like writing on the first story, but on the second story about the bandits, it seems a little rushed, especially in the part with the bandits. It went like "the bandits came and they had strong pokemon so they won."
In the first story there were extra details that made it more engaging, like how the prince's Arcanine could track scents and such. Maybe flesh out the bandits a bit more? You could specify which pokemon they used or something. It doesn't have to be as fleshed out as the real story, but maybe a bit more...
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