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Review of A bad night  Open in new Window.
Review by Shiney Day Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
Umm, please don't take this harshly, but I have no idea where your story is going. You seem to rushing it without any details or anything. Slow it down a bit and take time to build the story. Also, you have multiple spelling errors like"odored" multiple times. the readers will enjoy it more without so many mistakes. I'm sure you are a great writer and i can't wait to see what else you wwill bring to the plate.
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Review of Sapphire Roses  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Great plot but the bones need more flesh. Add more detail and slow the story down a bit. I think it has real potential ^_^
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