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Review of Mothers Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh wow! I felt your emotions as I also felt my own shame for the same reason. I knew my Mother was dying. I couldn't be there the day she died. I just couldn't. And like you, there were no last I love you and no last goodbyes.
I miss her so very much. Wishing you gentle healing.
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Review of A Gravestone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I live in the past daily. And you are right, I honestly believe the past will always live with me. I have had a lot of deaths in my family. But then again, I don't ever want to forget them. They were my life. My heart to yours. Wishing you a gentle healing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! You really had this reader drawn to your story, sad as it is. I don't know if this was written from personal experience but if so, my heart to yours. I didn't want to story to end. This left me wanting so much more. You are a terrific writer!!
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Review by eternal_sorrows Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is so beautiful!! Seriously! And your format is perfect. Words that speak loud.

ES
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Review of A Shallow Soul  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is really well written. I love all the metaphors. Beautiful!!

ES
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Review of Regret  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am sorry for your loss. My Mother passed away also and I believe regret is a part of grief. Writing has been my release. I wish you a very gentle healing.
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Review by eternal_sorrows Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very sad poem. I am sorry for your loss. This is a great tribute. I do wish you a very gentle healing.
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Review of Gone Forever  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like your concept here. Great thought. I have a 2 year old Maltese that I love as if one of my children.

Thanks for the read.
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Review of Everyday Miracles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading your story. I have 2 Maine Coon cats, and a Maltese. The cats are alot bigger than my full grown dog..lol.
Reading this, when you wrote about the sarcastic remark you got from the shelter, I felt a spark of anger. Someone like that should not be working with animals. It takes someone with love for animals, someone who would have understood your calls and sympathized with you. (I am so very against ANY type of animal care if not given with love).
You know, my oldest, Bacardi, age 3 has been neutered but loves to hunt and is fast when sneaking out the door. But always back just before the sun rises, so I know your worry.
This was a great write. Tells an interesting story with a happy ending.

Rene'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was soooo awesome! And yes, I smiled through this entire poem. I am adding this to my favorites.
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Review of Time is Brief  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This could almost be a song. Eyes shut tight, begging for relief. I guess I read a comma there. Other than that, I like the concept of this piece and the image you portray.
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Review of Restless  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am surprised this did not get higher ratings than it has. Imagination and metaphors...perfect poetry!!
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Review by eternal_sorrows Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Losing my own Mother 7 years ago along with my husband and grandmother at the same time, I understand your words you pen. I yearn so deeply still for my Mother. Her smile, smell, touch and even the sound of her voice.
Thank you for sharing this very beautiful poem.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh teihzbael! I so much enjoyed reading this, I wanted to read more. This tells a true story and very captivating! I am adding you to my favorites for I love reading you and learning more about you as well and when I get caught up from my absenteeism, I defiantly what to visit more.

Sorrows

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Review by eternal_sorrows Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is cute. What a concept. You sure covered a lot of metaphor sayings. I enjoyed reading your poem. Hey, wonder what a dog would think to the saying, It's raining cats and dogs? lol
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Review of Death's Call  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love your imagery of death. You have penned a sad yet, beautiful piece. Grief is the most deepest emotion one can feel and you share yours well.

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Review of While He's Dieing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My heart to yours in the loss of your father. This is writen from the heart as your true words ring.

Wishing you a gentle healing.
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Review by eternal_sorrows Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This read is so heart touching, beautiful and sad. Your message is heard.

Thank you!
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Deep, beautiful and very well written!I love the stanza, I pray that love may never come to me with murderous intent.....breathtaking!!

ES
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Review of Final Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am so sorry for the loss of your mother. Wonderful tribute. I feel the same about my mother who also passed.

I wish you a very gentle healing.

Sorrows
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Review of Sleep My Dear  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great tribute. Nicely penned.

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Review of Charlie  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful tribute to your friend. I am so sorry for your loss. It sounds as though you two shared a special bond of friendship. I wish you a bery gentle healing.

Sorrows
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My heart to yours. I am sorry for the loss of your son. I wish you and your family a very gentle healing.

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Review of The Window  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem you have penned and I haven't even read the story "Dead Child". Beautifully written!

Sorrows
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Review of Broken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Written from the heart. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself.
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