Hah! I like it. It reminds me of one of the stories in Scott Mccloud's "24-Hour Comics" compendiums. The only suggestion I have is about the ending, which seems a little abrupt and sort of begs a bunch of new questions. This was a pretty real-world scenario, so what happens when a guy who's turned into a bona-fide superhero suddenly shows up? But still, lots of fun. And I don't have any serious stylistic suggestions, so well done. Would love to see a sequel...
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