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This is a very wonderfully done poem! The words mesh and flow very well. There is a rhythm to the words that compliments the rhymes. By itself, even without the answer the poem is very touching. The answer itself is almost heart breaking. I would say more, but I would hate to give it away for those who haven’t found it yet.
That being said, I believe that every review should have some suggestions for making the writer better at their craft. The only complaint I have though I can’t put here without giving the answer away.
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