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Review by Jennifer Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
I thought Hate was a man all high and powerful until Jasmine said she would defeat her, which I honestly thought was, well, a bit corny, no offense, because it seems odd how someone just says they will search for and kill them without even knowing the whole story. I don;t get why hate wanted to kill them/her. there needs to be an exciting part, something to get my heart pumping, like how Hate tourtured them and soon opened up or something. Oh, and the story seemed so "goody goody gum drops" like everything happened so peacefully and nicely. It needs some unexpected turns. Well, happy writing!
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