I actually think that so far this is a very good start to something amazing and can turn into something great. I really like how this is stated and would really like to have my picture on a billboard but if not for my poetry and novels but it could be for my voice which I have been told is like an angel singing but I think the exact opposite.
This is kind of one of the most hardest decisions to make and actually my parents are fighting and there are six kids in the house three young kids and three teenagers. They are always accusing each other and it is not the first time this has happened it has also happened almost three years ago. Keep it up!
This me right now I am numb because my parents don't give a crap about what I do anymore and I never get to see my real mom anymore even though I would like to. I feel like I should cry sometimes but nothing comes no anger, sadness, pain, happiness none of it. What I like most about it is that every stanza doesn't rhyme unlike most of my poems.
I like this poem and it really sounds like my brother and he is really annoying. My brother is also very stubborn too and doesn't do what he is told. One of these days i 'm going to take him outside and him and i are gonna fight for real. I used to chase him down and UFC him as my dad says but soon him and me are gonna really fight.
I really like this poem because it deals with god although I do not go to church I still believe in him and have like twenty bibles laying around the house. I like how in the poem you are trying to talk to god and I like the part when you say "Will this pain kill me?" I wish that my fears would be subdued.
Mothers have a way with daughters and I really like your poem. I have a mother and then I have a mom. My mother is the that gave birth to me and my other two full blood siblings and then left for another dude. My mom is the woman that has supported me basically all my life. Keep writing. I can tell that there is emotion.
I like the poem and personally I don't think that world peace would ever be possible because of our president now who just happens to be the one and only Donald Trump who I have mixed feelings about and will not be discussing. You should keep writing and do what you love because the only thing that matters is doing what you love.
I like how you have used Minecraft for the story because I really like Minecraft and used to play it often but had to quit because I would play it all the time and then when school started i had to focus on my studies rather on gaming. Keep writing what you want and do what you like. At the end of the day the only thing that will really matter is you and what you have accomplished.
No one would ever criticize you I especially wouldn't because I have a lot of emotions and stress in my life and would never criticize anyone that has it too because most of my works have my emotions and feelings of what I am feeling that day so I can relate.
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