I could definitely relate to this. My friend who was getting ready to turn 19 in june got into a car accident, last week.
Broke his neck and everything else. I know the pain. But you are absolutely right, GOD MAKES NO MISTAKES. & that is what i love about this.
Love how the beginning of the story you're looking for the handkerchief, and at the end Katherine is.
Great story.. If you were to rewrite it, i'd put less detail about the dog and more on the story of the boy missing.
Great job though, I'd love to read more from you.
"But dead was dead no matter which way you sliced it" -I really like that.
This reminds me of a movie that i could watch over & over.
Really good work, keep it up!
I like the fact that I can relate to this.. It reminds me of me & my old "best friend".. We couldn't go a day without being together or talking... Now we don't even speak.
I LOVE how you started this off. The beginning was great, definitely caught my attention. The ending left me wondering where Grandma had ran off to with the mower.. I would love to read on.. Very good, i liked this a lot.. Great details.. Keep up the great work.
Good story.. Maybe a little more detail about the grama and sarahs relationship.. I really like how the strangers across the aisles character is rude.. makes the story more interesting.. either way, good story!!
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