Hi Gervic
Thank you for entering {bitem:2055137.
This is a lovely and inspirational poem which follows its prompt very closely.
Very good rhyme and rhythm and an enjoyable read.
Brenda
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This is a lovely poem with seasonal use of imagery to give the feeling of bleakness after the colourful foliage of Autumn.
Good use of rhyme and rhythm in accordance with the chosen form.
Brenda
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This is a powerfully emotional poem!
Very well-crafted in true Pantoum form, with excellent use of language and imagery throughout.
Well done!
Brenda
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This is a beautiful poem, painting the scene in the reader's mind.
An account of a lovely day spent on a paradise beach.
Good rhyme and rhythm throughout.
Brenda
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This is a beautiful, romantic poem! A letter written long ago, expressing love and devotion, evoking emotional feelings in the finder.
Good rhyme and rhythm and a most interesting read!
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This is a lovely poem but this contest is for rhyming metrical poetry whereas your poem is in free verse.
You are welcome to enter another poem for this round if you wish.
Brenda
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This is a charming poem about the delights of October (my favourite month).
An unusual rhyme scheme, explained by your helpful footnote, gives it a lyrical flow.
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This is a really lovely and well-crafted poem with excellent rhyme and rhythm.
Your use of imagery is superb, enabling the reader to envisage the drama unfolding.
A most satisfying read!
Brenda
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This is a lovely poem but this contest is for rhyming metrical poetry whereas your poem is free verse.
You are welcome to enter another poem for this round and I will delete this one.
Brenda
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This is a most interesting and well-written poem.
The rhythm and rhyme schemes are consistent throughout and the message of your poem is clear and inspirational.
Well done!
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This is a most unusual poem describing the anxieties and uncertainties that take hold of us sometimes.
It is helpful that you have given a definition of the form used here.
Brenda
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