I like the amount of description for each character and the potential this interactive has. Also, I like how it describes some of their breasts but then goes on to talk about other aspects. (Let's face it, it takes away mentioning it if that is basically all there is.) I wish there was a werewolf, but at this point if I were to add it on the end, I wouldn't want to dig through 12 chapters to find it.
Great story!! Really gets the imagination going. The mirror/painting trick was ingenious. Of all the things I've read to encourage a creepy scene that wasn't even close. I like a horror story that ends with the main character getting killed because it can happen, but doesn't always, so you never know who will make it out.
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