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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That was a great story, along with a nice twist at the end. The only thing is though, it why would she suspect there to be ghosts over there? She is obviously an aged woman, as you can tell by her death and her husband being dead for almost 15 years (assuming that this all is set to current time). Wouldn't it make more sense that she would suspect the people there are homeless or drunk? Other than that, it was a great story.
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