Dear Friend,
The poem is pretty interesting but could have been written much more better as you seem quite talented! The second stanza is little rough. The thought and idea of motivating people who are close to victory is really modest. "A bit of smile don't deny" is quite genius!
Dear Gary,
Letters to Mom are something genuine and its between your mom and you. I don't have the right to comment or review this. Surely you do miss your mom and Please don't worry she is in Safe Hands and we all will meet after Rapture. I was moved by these letters. I'm sorry if I've said anything hurtful or wrong,Please forgive me.
Dear Friend,
Whoever broke your heart might be regretting it now. I liked the never give up part, so much like "us." A person with a broken heart sure feels his or her heart is in the rubble after an earthquake. I'm sure you wrote this earnestly letting your emotions out. It shows!!!!
Dear Friend,
I liked the irony about how the cowboy says the guy with the recorder is going to pay! You seem pretty smooth and confessional. A good sport too with the made up reviews.
Dear Friend,
Your dreams reflect your attitude to serve God and they say whenever you dream about Church it also means you are growing spiritually. As a young girl myself, I have many dreams about leading praise and worship at Church but someone insults me in the crowd and I cry. As you mentioned in the previous article on dreams, its true that one is overwhelmed by their emotions. Thank you for letting us know and could you also do an article on how symbols in our dreams interpret our religious beliefs because of late I've been dreaming that I'm drowning in the middle of Atlantic Sea in a boat and for a moment everything froze except me and I could see water rushing to engulf me. I woke up with a start. Please help me out with it if you can decipher anything!
Dear Friend,
This work was quite impressive and love hurts at times. The poetic way of presenting love in its negative shades is quite awesome and I feel your masterpiece is talking to a person's feelings directly. Kudos on the good job.
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