This is a short but meaningful poem. However, I feel like the poem should have at least 10 lines, maybe even 5. Sometimes small poems mean the biggest things. I look forward to reading more of your work. (Please note that this is a writer to another writer.)
This an amazing contest. I would be honored to take place in it. Excuse my brain cells. I'm think of something already, not to gory, but a perfect fit for your description. I'm sure I'll be capable to fit into your requirements, but just in case I'll be reading everything at least 20x times. Thank you!
Spectacular. One suggestion, "Theresa" is mentioned throughout the story, and sometimes more than once in a sentence. For example, "Lucy looked at Theresa with eye brows furrowed, giving Theresa a look as though Theresa were nuts...-" Theresa is mentioned 3 times in a singular sentence, which isn't bad, but repetitive. Instead, you could use words like: girl, she, their. For example, the sentence could end up sounding like:
Lucy looked at her with eye brows furrowed, giving Theresa a look as though she were nuts...-
Overall, splendid story and brilliant title, 5 star review from me.
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