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Review of My Blood Red Rose  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love how you used personification throughout the poem. The feel of it was wonderful and sort of forced my eyes to keep reading. Write on!
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Yep, I'm sure of it now, I have no clue of the meaning in this piece of art. But I'll mark it good because I like the feel to it.
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Um, can you like reply to me telling me the entire meaning of this? I'll rate it good only because I'm sure someone more coherent than me would do the same.
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Review of Trapped Inside  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Okay, I like the poem. But, instead of the genre being Dark, lol, it should be physotic. :) But, yeah, really, you described the illusions perfectly. Write on!
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the message the poem displays and I can tell you're religious, so between you and me, I'll ask a question that's been bothering me lately. How do you know there is a God?
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Review of The Stars  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I'd say it was quite dull Valerie. -_-
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Review of Thru The Dark  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Well, very heartfelt I should say. And I take it you're religious! I like the poem. I don't like when people tell me to fix something of mine, but shouldn't it be like a dash instead of a comma? Like, "Thru darkest of months - to darkest of years- I pray? I'm asking you this, should it be your way or mine, or is it merely how you like to write your poetry?
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Review of Remembrance  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Alright, here's me being truthful, I didn't understand any of it, and it could be because I'm a kid, but yeah, this is my review of it. :)
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Review of Blood Slave  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great story! Though it was a bit scary. :)
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I read the book TWICE and recently, yet I got a 62.2%. :( Oh well, those are hard questions.
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wasn't that a bit of an easy question? Either way, I like easy!
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Review of Bumble Boy  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Okay, so I sorta liked the story. Though I got lost in the midst of it. I don't get why it's named Bumble Boy still. I know you explained it, but it's just me and I don't understand. I don't know how frequently you're on here, but next time you are, can you explain the story to me instead of me reading it again, because I hate not knowing what I'm reading.
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Review of Peace  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love it, it shows the truth and everything. I think this poem actually brought tears to my eyes. I loved the part, "I am now happy" it's wonderful! I think I wrote something somewhat similar called, "Angel." Keep on writing! I'll be sure to read more of your work, though you may not like opinions from someone who is fourteen..
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay, I just read this, yet again, but I can't find out one simple thing, and that is why does it drain so much of Zek's energy when he uses magic? That I don't understand. Anywho, I'm sure you've talked to a girl named Valerie on here. Her email is valerie47@writing.com. She posted little clips of a few stories we're both working on on this site. Can you like go over a few of them? I think she may have them marked as private, but if not, can you check some out?
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Review of A Day on the Farm  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I love this story. It's funny! Yet it's sad as well. And the fact that you let all of the chickens die was mean. And I'm not criticizing it, but what's the point because I'm a bit slow and not sure of the point. But still, I'd say all of those chickens were traders and talked about each other behind one-another's back.
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Oh, I see what kind of stories you write. They're weird! But I like them still!
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Review of Broken World  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, this is now my new favorite of yours. I mean, I like how all of it is completely true.
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Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
You have a hard word-search! I killed half my brain cells trying to find those words!
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Review of When Hearts Bond  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
OMG! This was such a good story. I mean, usually cultural and lovey-dovey stories don't interest me. But this is quite good. I like the mixed race towards the end. Then there was how the woman liked the man and he just didn't see it until the end. I would recommend you listen to the song "All At Once" by The Fray!
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Review of The Rain  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hey Alexis! This was pretty good. And though you're new, (like myself) - she says under her breath- it's still great! I have had one of those day, plenty in fact. You're a great writer, though. Not like I'm a professional, but yeah, I still think it's good. I like rain! Write on!
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Review of summer words  Open in new Window.
Review by Just Aniece! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice word search! Girlfriend. This is your beloved sister.
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