I actually really liked this song. Its sort of funny because I had a song stuck in my head, and the music of that song is still replaying in my mind, but your lyrics are there instead of the actual words. My favorite line from this was, "Now I've lost more than too much sleep", probably because I know exactly how you feel at that point.
I like this a lot. I don't know if you are Buddhist, but that part interested me. The time I spent in China last year taught me a lot about Buddhism and the way people actually regard it. My favorite line was, "boulders are just illusions". That struck me for some reason, and I had to think about it for a minute before moving on and reading the rest.
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