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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The theme of this story is different and no doubt interesting.... although I must say that the interest only begins to garner momentum from Part IV of the series. The concept of two different universes colliding out of which new species manage to originate deseves kudos. But there is a slight glitch.... what I am unable to comprehend is :-

1. With the collision of the two parallel universes do new species originate or mutate?? Because in the story it is shown that Ravi actualyy mutates into another species..... and different species then arise from this mutation...

2. How and why does Ravi mutate into a different species?? This point is not clear anywhere in the story.

There are other unanswered questions also but I wont bother to take up space arising them here, because this is a review not a Q & A session!!!

Overally a really nice attempt towards a modern day sci-fi. I am giving this a 3.5 rating. Would have rated it around 4 but the plot loses its grip towards the end and becomes a bit amateurish. The beginning especially the first part could be made more interesting because its always the starting of the story which creates interest in the mind of the reader. Only if the starting is good one is interested to proceed further.

Still a very creative attempt. Keep up the good work!
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