I really like this poem. It gave me a very sad vibe. I love the way it was worded and I think it flowed well. It makes me wonder if any of my loved ones that have passed away think I forgot about them just because I stopped grieving as bad, even though they cross my mind everyday. But I love this!
I like this poem, I thought it was very inspirational. I like the way this was worded and it flowed well. My favorite lines were in the 3rd stanza when it say "A song
of renewal
echoes within each soul;"
I loved this. Although it was short and simple I think it's really cute. I like how you're coming from a dog's perspective. You make me miss my dog /: But this poem was adorable to me and unique and I liked it a lot.
Awe this poem is kinda short and just simple, and even though it didn't have much detail and imagery, the words itself made me feel something. It made me think of my mother and how I would feel if I ever broke her heart. I really liked this.
I didn't really understand what was going on. I thought that you were just going to be giving really good descriptions on "The Red Room"
And why is it called the Red Room if it's green and blue? And also you said there were 4 cats, but then when you listed the colors of each cat you said there were 3 brown cats and 2 grey cats and that ='s 5 cats. And then later on in the writing it said something about a white cat but it wasn't mentioned earlier.
This got my attention although I was very confused haha.
I loved this. I thought this was a really cool poem. I like the way it was worded and it flowed very well. Most of all I like the idea of the poem. You had very good description in this poem like "a flesh eating love, in a blood splattered shed" I love that line. I like how you referred to a cup of coffee as the drink of the dead. I laughed at the line "Memories of the coffee and the drugs that I ate" And you had a good ending line for the poem as well, I really liked this.
I like this poem because it has good imagery, I can actually see the girl waking up and looking at her phone nervously as she sees his name. This poem let me kind of feel the emotions that were going on, like the nervousness, and the sadness, and even a little bit of the resentment the girl had torwards him. However, the part the confused me was when you said "That's all I need, a pity call" and then after the conversation was over with you said "He is arrogant, stubborn, and shows no pity." If he doesn't show any pity then why did he give you a pity call? Overall though this poem was good, I really liked it.
I absolutely loved this. I like how it's talking about you being so close with God that it's almost like half of him in you and how that makes you be able to comfort people and that makes people want to come to you when times get rough. I like that you're showing people that having Jesus in your life makes everything better for you. I really like the way you worded this poem.
I really like this poem and the way it was worded. I think it has good imagery and good detail. It kind of threw me off a little bit when you used "battered" twice in the same stanza but overall it was really well and it flows good.
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