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Review of Exquisite  Open in new Window.
Review by Acolyte Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Stunning. I don't know what else to say, this poem hit home, hard, maybe because I understand it so well

Just a question, did you intentionally leave the e of the word exquisite in the body of the poem, but not in the title?
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Homophobics like to quote the bible, but they never seem to think about the line that says "Judge not, lest ye be judged"

I think the experience of love is the same for all - all that differs is the physical act. Still, I like the first line as it stands.

Thank you
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Is it fair to give a 5 star purely because the poem hit so close to home? I felt in places the fluidity was lost, but it still managed to resonate with my own issues.

The sentiments here are like the other side of the coin to my poem My Choice, where I deal with the same topic with a bit more anger! Please won't you give it a look?

Afraid I don't yet have gift points to give, I have only just joined.
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Review of Lost You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
New at this, so bare with me

I thought it was great - ending is harsh, like a slap in the face, which says a lot with so few words.

How was that?
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Review of Lost You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
New at this, so bare with me

I thought it was great - ending is harsh, like a slap in the face, which says a lot with so few words.

How was that?
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