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Review of Trading Places  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This...was beautiful. The extent to which I wish such an idea were possible is beyond my capability to express. What I feel, the good and the bad, I wish to share with others. I, nor anyone can truly feel what others feel though. To be honest, this brought a few tears to my eyes as I wish to show what I feel to those I love and to those who it could benefit. I have so many thoughts, about how to help people, about ideas, philosophies, about how I feel about those who surround me. I always suppress them so as to not cast off the shell in which I live, but an idea like this would be grand. I honestly love this and these words cannot extend to you the feeling I have.
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Review of Fear, Why?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Fear is in all of us, and this work shows how fear has the potential to hold us back from things we don't want to be afraid of, yet are. Just something to think about, though I'm sure you already have; fear is a feeling that, while unpleasant, keeps us human. If we didn't have fear, we would all take risks that could potentially make us go insane, or even cause our death. The fear is here!
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for entry "SubspaceOpen in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I really like the idea of a fifth dimension. Most movies bring aliens, or weird creatures into what another dimension is, but this brings a more realistic, and interesting view and how it could affect the dimension we live in presently. I have often written about insightful topics such as time and life, however, this topic goes very in depth, far more than I have. I very much enjoyed this work!
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Review of Shadows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good!! I can see the shadows sneaking around at night, yet at day, remaining innocently calm. The ripping off of the head part was a little unexpected, but a good touch since it is horror. It becomes slightly humorous at the end as well when the shadow, a dark, evil creature, is forced to play outside.
Keep writing! I will definitely check out more of your works!
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