I have just posted a brand-new story: Forging the Future (chapters 1-2). The family that fakes together stays together #2135553 The post contains the first two chapters, and I would be grateful for review: What are your impressions, what works, what doesn't work, what would you like to know about the characters Thanks |
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Hello again Diane: I've added chapters 2 & 3 to my posting "We the People Are Good to Eat", along with a posting containing chapters 3, 4 & 5 I have upgraded my account, so I am now able to post the entire novel as a single blog, but that might be too much for a reader to take on all at once. So I'm posting each chapter separately; thinking that will be easier for reviewers to handle. Then once every chapter has been posted separately, I'll repost the entire novel in a single blog. I invite you to give the added chapters a look, and let me know what you think. Thank you again. |
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Rick comes home to his vault of forgeries, but he knows he is being followed.
#2135553 by Diane