A poem that describes nature's transition .from daylight to darkness |
Review. Of: Moonshadow Sky By: Julia Milano Review by :express I enjoyed your poem very much. Moonshadow respects the natural beauty of nature. Please keep writing about nature. Connecting with nature rejuvenates our spirit. Your tribute to nature is well written. I did not notice any grammatical errors. Moonshadow is misspelled. The spell check indicated Moon Shadow. Of course your title is your creative license. Overall Impression: My emotions were awakened to nature's many shadows and shades of color. The wide range of colors in natures rainbow.The colorful aspects of nature mirror human emotions. Your poem has a deep emotional impact for me. It is a reminder to set aside time to appreciate nature's gifts to humanity. Rhythm and Flow: I noticed a connection between the color palette and the depth of human emotions. Your. artistic. weaving. the different. aspects. intrigued me. I appreciated the crafting of both aspects of your poem. The techniques applied represented rhythm to me. Imagery: Moonshadow Sky is very expressive! I savored your colorful use of words. Your technique is similar to an artist painting a watercolor. I feel your skillful use of words made a beautiful. poem. Time and Place: The soft transition from daylight to dusk to night's darkness. Your description is unique. Life is full of transitions. Your poem is a gentle reminder of life's high and lows. My imagination took me to a small harbor. on a rural lake. You were. sitting. in a comfortable. deck chair. God was painting. your poem in your mind. |