Mulan and Shang

Shang's POV:
"Mulan... You fight good"
dang how i wanted to tell her how beautiful she was how i wanted her to be mine.
"Oh...thank you" She said in a disappointed voice.
I watched her walk away and hop onto her horse and ride away.
I wanted to chase after her and tell her how i really felt about her how awesome of a fighter she is but my mouth wasn't working right.
Once she was down the several flights of stairs the emperor came up to me and said
"The flower that bloom in adversity is the most rare and beautiful of all"
What? What was he talking about?
"Sir?" I was just about to ask hm what he meant but he cut me of
"You don't meet a girl like that every dynasty" he put his top on and walked away
I began to run down he stair two at a time
"General where are you going?"asked ling
"Back to reality!"I yelled back

I finally got to the bottom of the stair and jumped on my white horse and rode after Mulan
My heart was pounding. I had to see mulan one last time without a crowd watching so i could tell her how i realy felt about her even though i just figured out she was a girl right from the start.
Mulan wasn't far ahead thani thought

Once she was in sight i slowed down I didn't want her to see me following her
Hours past and I began to think of what i was going to say to her
What to say to her parents when i show up at their house and how to get her alone without the parents suspecting anything.

She stopped a few times along the ways but only to eat an sleep for a couple of hours man she really wanted to get back home to see her family agian

Days passed and she still didn't notice me...yet.

Finally she came to a village my guess was her home village. She rode straight through the village and kept going to a few minutes more so apparently she lived a bit aways from the village.

She stopped in front of her house and just sat there for a few minutes. Finally she got off her horse without tying it up and walk around the back of the house.

I waite a few miutes to get off my horse so she would have time to say hello to her family
Two women where in the entrance of the backyard one an elderly woman

"Excuse me does Fa mulan live here?"

Chapter two coming up soon