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This week: Internal Logic Edited by: Jeff  
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"Do not over-intellectualize the production process.
Try to keep it simple: tell the darned story."
-- Tom Clancy
Trivia of the Week: Jacqueline Susann is perhaps best know as the author of Valley of the Dolls, a book that has sold more than 31 million copies to date. A lesser known and more interesting fact about her, though, is that with the publication of her third novel Once Is Not Enough in 1973, she became the first author to ever have three consecutive novels reach #1 on the New York Times Bestseller List.
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INTERNAL LOGIC
In last week's Mystery newsletter ("Mystery Newsletter (August 22, 2018)" ), I talked a little about villains and how their actions and motivations need to make sense within the context of the story. In this week's For Authors newsletter, I thought I'd expand on that idea a little and talk about internal logic as a whole concept (not just as it relates to the villains). Internal logic can loosely be defined as logic that applies within the framework of your story. Character choices, setting details, narrative elements, etc. don't necessarily have to be logical by real-world standards, as long as they're logical in the context you've created for the story. For example, if you establish that your character has magical powers that stem from his knowledge of spells that he's committed to a spell book, the internal logic of the story is that he needs his spell book in order to cast spells. If you were to then have a scene where that character were imprisoned and his spell book were taken away, it would violate the internal logic of the story to have him able to cast spells without his trusty book from the confines of his prison cell.
The key word in that last paragraph was "established." Your story can be about anything you want, as long as you establish audience expectations so they understand the rules of the world you're writing about. Faster-than-light travel that leads to space-knights with laser swords planet-hopping around the galaxy? Nothing wrong with that, as long as the rules of internal logic that you've set up for the universe apply consistently to all characters and stories. Where authors get into trouble is when they change the rules in the middle of the game (or the story, as the case may be), especially when that advantages the protagonist in some way. That dynamic can make the audience feel cheated and could potentially really disconnect them from the narrative.
These rules apply even in non-fantasy settings. If you're writing an action/thriller about a special ops soldier caught behind enemy lines with no way of being rescued, you need to change the circumstances (e.g., have him find a way to contact his handlers, signal for help, etc.) before help arrives because the whole premise you've established is that the cavalry can't come riding in to save him. In a romance novel, if you establish that the guy and the girl can't be together because of some external factor (e.g., socioeconomic inequality, difference in personality types, an antagonist getting in the way, etc.), you have to seed the idea of what will change in the situation before you actually make the change or the reader will feel cheated when you violate the "rules" that you've already established.
One of the things that I do to make sure the internal logic of my story tracks is to keep notes nearby as I'm writing (and especially when I'm revising). I make notes of character relationships, major plot points, relevant pieces of their backstory, setting information, and personality details that I want to make sure I don't forget. In the same way that I track physical details so I don't accidentally describe the same character as having green eyes in one scene and blue eyes in another, or so I don't describe the diner as across the street from the movie theater and then later write something that implies those two locations are across town, I also keep track of the more intangible things so I don't mix those up either. I refer to those little reminders so I don't forget that my wizard needs his spell book to cast a spell, or that my heroine is deeply loyal to her family and is anguished at the thought of angering them by choosing a partner her family doesn't approve of.
When you're writing a story, especially (but not necessarily) one set in an imaginary setting, make sure you're doing the work to ensure that all of your characters and narrative adhere to the same internal logic. There's nothing more frustrating than being taken out of a story when you read something and have to stop to say, "Wait, how did that work?" or "Why can the character suddenly do this random new thing now?" The work you put into making each of your characters and your overall story have consistent internal logic will pay off with readers who are engaged and interested rather than being pulled out of the narrative by inconsistency.
Until next time,
Jeff
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