 Drama: June 22, 2016 Issue [#7711] |
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This week: What Grabs Reader's Attention Edited by: Dawn Embers  
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A discussion looking at the different spots used on static items, and others, used to entice a reader and how they pertain to showcasing the drama. |
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When posting online, often one goal aside from just wanting to write the story is to get someone to read it. Other than entering contests or requesting reviews, there are a few parts of the item that is used in particular in hopes of gaining that attention. The main ones are the title, intro/description, or the first sentences and paragraphs.
Title
This one can be both hit or miss and a challenge. Titles vex me to know end because it's difficult to find someone that fits the story and doesn't seem boring or overly generic. Title has a limited space too, so there is only so much one can do with that particular section of the item here on WDC. It helps to have something other than "My Story" at least, and the chosen words can also help indicate genre or the dramatic elements featured in the item.
Intro/Description
Here is where you have a little more room to showcase the story contents and give a hint to the drama available. While it is nice to have details like which contest it might have been written for, once the judging is over, it's better to focus the bulk of this small section similar to an elevator pitch. This is the longest place aside from the actual story in order to entice the potential reader. Have some aspect of the drama involved and that will be a good starting point for grabbing that attention.
First Sentences and Paragraphs
Finally, if the reader actually clicks on the item or finds it through other means like random reads, the first sentences and paragraphs are going to be key in having the person read all of the story. People always have the option to close a story and move on to something else. The very beginning has to grab their attention enough to keep them reading so they can discover the drama of the story and want to know what happens next.
These are the main locations for us on WDC to grab the online reader's attention. Having these different elements attached to the story will be helpful and can really showcase the dramatic side along with gaining the desired attention. It's all in how you handle writing the item. |
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What do you do in order to catch a reader's attention? As a reader, do you focus on title or the intro/description?
Way back in October, I wrote a drama newsletter about perception and received a few comments in response to the topic.
Comment by Quick-Quill 
Perception is reality is so TRUE! in real life so it can be translated in to the fiction. I know someone with a mental issue where her reality is so far out of what is real its terrible. Here is the trick to remember. Some of this is because a person cannot admit they make mistakes. Its true! When one has OCB/D the reality that one might make a mistake is unexceptable. What if their reality were pressed upon a real world? Another person wanted attention and made up stories that he was hired by the local police to put the finger on drug deals in his school. He really believed it. He made up situations to match what he belived to be happening. He had an entire family "sort of" believing him until he had to make good on a deal and couldn't. It all fell apart. sad, but makes a great storyline.
Comment by Prelooker 
The best examples of unreliable narrative I've ever come across are "The Usual Suspects" and "The Fight Club".
First-person narrative gives a lot of room to play a lot with building stories that seem to fall apart in the end, only to show the reader/veiwer has enough elements to trace back the real story behind the tale--if you have the talent to achieve it, of course. Those great stories that push you to read/watch them over to better understand them.
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