Short Stories: June 03, 2015 Issue [#7031]
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 This week: We Read Short Shorts
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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
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About This Newsletter

The purpose of this newsletter is to help the Writing.com short story author hone their craft and improve their skills. Along with that I would like to inform, advocate, and create new, fresh ideas for the short story author. Write to me if you have an idea you would like presented.

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Letter from the editor


We Read Short Shorts

I've been reading some stories from Neil Gaiman's collection "Trigger Warning". While his style of writing might not be everyone's cup of tea, I did have a passing thought about short stories I would like to share. I think one of the best things about short stories, is they not only tell a story, but they leave you thinking about the bigger picture.

Because short stories are capsules, without much time to build worlds, assemble armies of characters and have multiple conflicts running along the arc, we're left with our imagination to do the rest. When a story leaves the character dead in his bed, my mind flies along and imagines the neighbors knocking, the police being called and the autopsy. Perhaps the protagonist doesn't get away with murder. Maybe time and some forensics find him. See?

So next time you're editing your short story, give some thought about whether or not cutting a scene with some extra world building in it, or give that really interesting character a pass with the scalpel and let your readers see how amusing he is and why he ended up in your story in the first place.

And as always, read and Write On.


This month's question: Do short stories leave you disappointed or wanting more?


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And that was the problem.


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Ask & Answer


This month's question: Do short stories leave you disappointed or wanting more?

Last month's question: Do stories need happy endings?


blunderbuss wrote: Thanks for another thought-provoking newsletter. I had just read another newsletter which says that romantic fiction almost universally requires a happy ending. Horror stories often end in disaster all round. Sci-Fi can be dystopian. Apart from those genres (there are probably others), I think it depends on the writer as much as the story. However, stories need to feel 'complete' - so if your characters do not overcome their conflict, or reach their goals, then the irresolution needs to be acceptable. Daphne du Maurier (lived and wrote about my part of the world here in the UK) is a writer who comes to mind - 'Rebecca' (not happy ending and she starts the book with it!), 'My cousin Rachel' - ambiguous ending, 'The House on the Strand' - main character ends up mortally sick.

Quick-Quill Author Icon sent: I do believe in Happy Endings. That being said what is a happy ending? I have a story about a woman who is in the early 1900s. Her story intersects with a young man who is one of the first FBI agents. At the end he must go on to his new postion. She gets an offer to go to New York to a dream job. Both find each other attractive. They agree to meet some day in Washington. Will they? Ah, but that's another story. I have left the door open, but they are both happy to be doing what they both love. I hope the reader agrees.

Jimmy E. Durham, RN-BC Author Icon replied: It depends on the story. That's a really hard question to answer. Art imitates life, but readers also read to escape from the troubles of reality. I think it also has a lot to do with your audience. Someone reading Cinderella is going to expect a happy ending and it have no bearing on how they view the world. Likewise on someone who reads a zombie novel. For me, the ending takes care of itself a lot of the time.

kindabizarre responded: I don't think all stories need happy endings. Sometimes happy endings are just boring. Readers get really out of whack when you hit them with a sad/odd ending. The only thing that I can't stand is an incomplete ending. If there's going to be another book then it's fine but when the author leaves some things unexplained..it sucks!

Elfin Dragon-finally published Author Icon answered: I don't believe stories always need happy endings, especially if you're writing a series. For instance, I've noted to others the author Janny Wurts writes depressing really well. Her stories are well thought out and I love every one of them, but they definitely make you cry. And I remember Mercedes Lackey's series "Last Herald Mage". (spoiler) Who didn't cry when the main character Vanel died but it didn't make the series any less great. So sad endings? Bring them on.

Zeke Author Icon adds: Happy endings are mostly nice, but more importantly stories need complete endings in my opinion.

willwilcox said: Stories don't need happy endings, just ask Hamlet, Anna Karenina, The Grapes of Wrath. Stories reflect life, life has tragedy, and unexpected endings. And like Slingblade, "That's all I have to say about that...huh...ummm."

brom21 Author Icon tells us: I think a story would be very sobering and unique to end badly where the protagonist dies along with the antagonist. I liked how in the Superman comics he is killed by a powerful enemy called Doomsday. Superman gets killed but he saves the world in the process. A story where the good guy loses completely would be shocking, but morbidly cool. So that is my two cents. Thanks for the newsletter!

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