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About This Newsletter

         October is the month of ghouls, witches, ghosts, and lots of other scary things that go bump in the night. In celebration of the spirit of Halloween I thought we ought to take a look at creepy, cute, Halloween poetry this month. We will look at poetry written with the intent of telling a scary story or just celebrating the month. As we look at Halloween poetry, I will make a few offerings from the choicest Writing.Com poets to be found, and provide you with this week’s list of favorite poets. A few classic beauties will round out our lesson, and in closing I will answer the feedback from the last edition, listing the winners of the gift points. Becky Simpson Author IconMail Icon


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         The story of Halloween goes back over 2000 years to the ancient Celts. Druidic priests regarded the day as the end of the year. Not only was it their day for celebrating the year's harvest, but October 31 itself was also the day of Samhain, a festival for honoring the dead. In order to appease the wandering spirits they believed roamed at night, the Celtic priests made fires in which they burned sacrifices, made charms, and cast spells. Portions of the Celtic holiday of the dead eventually passed into Christian culture after the Romans conquered the Celts and tried to bring the Celts into the "Christian fold." It eventually became apparent to the church leaders that the Celts, in spite of their conformation to some aspects of Christian culture, were stubbornly sticking with elements of their old religion.

          So, in the seventh century AD, the church moved its All Saints' Day, a holiday for honoring early Christian martyrs, from a day in May to November 1, thus associating it with the old Druid death rituals of October 31. By the tenth century A.D., the Catholic Church had added a new holiday, All Souls' Day. This day was set aside to honor all of the dead, not just the early Christian Saints. Celebration of Halloween came to America with early Irish and Scottish immigrants. By then, though, it had already started to lose its mysterious overtones and was becoming merely a harvest celebration: a night of bobbing for apples, eating popcorn, and telling ghost stories around a bonfire. It was already changing into the holiday for children with which we in the 20th century are so familiar.

         Our first offering is a cute ghost / witch poem that in the best tradition of Halloween has a trick to it.



HALLOWEEN MAGIC
A bald-headed ghost
Drank some witches' brew
And on top of his head
A strange thing grew.

It was pointed and tall
And black as a bat
With stringy long hair
Where his head was flat.

The sad little ghost
Didn't want any hair
Or a black pointed hat
So he said, "Witch beware!"
Then he chanted some words
With a spell-casting switch
And gave Halloween Night
A bald-headed witch!!

~Barbara M. Hales~


         I started smiling as I read about this tricky ghost and bald headed witch. What a mental picture that made. As we continue our look at poetry that celebrates the macabre nature of Halloween. Let’s go back in time a bit and look at some earlier works.


The Haunted Palace
Edgar Allan Poe

In the greenest of our valleys
By good angels tenanted,
Once a fair and stately palace-
Radiant palace- reared its head.
In the monarch Thought's dominion-
It stood there!
Never seraph spread a pinion
Over fabric half so fair!

Banners yellow, glorious, golden,
On its roof did float and flow,
(This- all this- was in the olden
Time long ago,)
And every gentle air that dallied,
In that sweet day,
Along the ramparts plumed and pallid,
A winged odor went away.

Wanderers in that happy valley,
Through two luminous windows, saw
Spirits moving musically,
To a lute's well-tuned law,
Round about a throne where, sitting
(Porphyrogene!)
In state his glory well-befitting,
The ruler of the realm was seen.

And all with pearl and ruby glowing
Was the fair palace door,
Through which came flowing, flowing, flowing,
And sparkling evermore,
A troop of Echoes, whose sweet duty
Was but to sing,
In voices of surpassing beauty,
The wit and wisdom of their king.

But evil things, in robes of sorrow,
Assailed the monarch's high estate.
(Ah, let us mourn!- for never morrow
Shall dawn upon him desolate!)
And round about his home the glory
That blushed and bloomed,
Is but a dim-remembered story
Of the old time entombed.

And travellers, now, within that valley,
Through the red-litten windows see
Vast forms, that move fantastically
To a discordant melody,
While, like a ghastly rapid river,
Through the pale door
A hideous throng rush out forever
And laugh- but smile no more.


         Yike, now that’s scary! Especially the last verse sounds very unearthly. Poe is probably the most easily recognized poet of the spooky, creepy, and macabre. Reading his works in high school always spooked me out. Okay one more from yesteryear.




The Haunted House

Thomas Hood

PART I
Some dreams we have are nothing else but dreams,
Unnatural, and full of contradictions ;
Yet others of our most romantic schemes
Are something more than fictions.
It might be only on enchanted ground;
It might be merely by a thought's expansion;
But in the spirit, or the flesh, I found
An old deserted Mansion.
A residence for woman,child, and man,
A dwelling-place, -- and yet no habitation;
A House, -- but under some prodigious ban
Of excommunication.
Unhinged the iron gates half open hung,
Jarr'd by the gusty gales of many winters,
That from its crumbled pedestal had flung
One marble globe in splinters.
No dog was at the threshold, great or small;
No pigeon on the roof -- no household creature --
No cat demurely dozing on the wall --
Not one domestic feature.
No human figure stirr'd, to go or come,
No face look'd forth from shut or open casement;
No chimney smoked -- there was no sign of Home
From parapet to basement.
With shatter'd panes the grassy court was starr'd
The time-worn coping-stone had tumbled after!
And thro' the ragged roof the sky shone, barr'd
With naked beam and rafter.
O'er all there hung a shadow and a fear;
A sense of mystery the spirit daunted,
And said, as plain as whisper in the ear,
The place is Haunted!
The flow'r grew wild and rankly as the weed,
Roses with thistles struggled for espial,
And vagrant plants of parasitic breed
Had overgrown the Dial.
But gay or gloomy, steadfast or infirm,
No heart was there to heed the hour's duration;
All times and tides were lost in one long term
of stagnant desolation.
The wren had built within the Porch, she found
Its quiet loneliness so sure and thorough;
And on the lawn, -- within its turfy mound, --
The rabbit made its burrow.
The rabbit wild and gray, that flitted thro'
The shrubby clumps, and frisk'd, and sat and vanish'd,
But leisurely and bold, as if he knew
His enemy was banish'd.
The wary crow, -- the pheasant from the woods --
Lull'd by the still and everlasting sameness,
Close to the Mansion, like domestic broods,
Fed with a 'shocking tameness.'
The coot was swimming in the reedy pond,
Beside the water-hen, so soon affrighted;
And in the weedy moat the heron, fond
Of solitude, alighted.
The moping heron, motionless and stiff,
That on a stone, as silently and stilly,
Stood, an apparent sentinel, as if
To guard the water-lily.
No sound was heard except, from far away,
The ringing of the Whitwall's shrilly laughter,
Or, now and then, the chatter of the jay,
That Echo murmur'd after.
But Echo never mock'd the human tongue;
Some weighty crime, that Heaven could not pardon,
A secret curse on that old Building hung,
And its deserted Garden.
The beds were all untouch'd by hand or tool;
No footstep mark'd the damp and mossy gravel,
Each walk as green as is the mantled pool,
For want of human travel.
The vine unpruned, and the neglected peach,
Droop'd from the wall with which they used to grapple;
And on the canker'd tree, in easy reach,
Rotted the golden apple.
But awfully the truant shunn'd the ground,
The vagrant kept aloof, and daring Poacher,
In spite of gaps that thro' the fences round
Invited the encroacher.
For over all there hung a cloud of fear,
A sense of mystery the spirit daunted,
And said, as plain as whispcr in the ear,
The place is Haunted!
The pear and quince lay squandered on the grass;
The mould was purple with unheeded showers
Of bloomy plums -- a wi1derness it was
Of fruits, and weeds, and flowers!
The marigold amidst the nettles blew,
The gourd embraced the rose bush in its ramble.
The thistle and the stock together grew,
The holly-hock and bramble.
The bear-bine with the lilac interlaced,
The sturdy bur-dock choked its slender neighbour,
The spicy pink. All tokens were effaced
Of human care and labour.
The very yew Formality had train'd
To such a rigid pyramidal stature,
For want of trimming had almost regain'd
The raggedness of nature.
The Fountain was a-dry -- neglect and time
Had marr'd the work of artisan and mason,
And efts and croaking frogs, begot in slime,
Sprawl'd in the ruin'd bason.
The Statue, fallen from its marble base,
Amidst the refuse leaves, and herbiage rotten,
Lay like the Idol of some bygone race,
Its name and rites forgotten.
On ev'ry side the aspect was the same,
All ruin'd, desolate, forlorn, and savage:
No hand or foot within the precinct came
To rectify or ravage.
For over all there hung a cloud of fear,
A sense of mystery the spirit daunted,
And said as plain as whisper in the ear,
The place is Haunted!



         Okay, that qualifies as spooky in my book. As I cower under my blanket and try to ignore the wind rapping at my window, maybe we should switch to Writing.Com poets and hopefully some less intense work. I don’t think it’s a good thing for me to hide under the blankets.


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Deep down in the unseen dark,
Broken souls shiver in anticipation
Of the coming of night - their night,
The night when the dead walk the earth.

Eyes twinkle with calculated madness
As the countdown to midnight begins.
The spirit clock strikes the hour,
Death bells toll, music to their ears.

The door to the other side creaks open;
Mistress Moon cowers behind the clouds
As misty nightmares pour through the black
Of Purgatory's gate thrown wide.

Time for screams, time for chaos!
Barking dogs run with tails tucked,
Children cry out in fitful dreams,
Parents tremble and lock their doors.

Time is racing - too fast - dawn approaches.
Spirits dread the coming of the light.
Fleeting freedom visciously revoked,
Their anguished sighs haunt the frosty air.

The Ebony Gate drifts inexorably closed
With a final mournful, ghostly clang.
The dead are once again entombed,
Till the next Halloween Night.

Karen Dean Salter
10/02/05

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         Karen that’s pretty dark. Do you live in the northeast? Such dark things seem more prevalent there since they have a greater period of history to draw upon. Just teasing; about the northeast stuff. I am afraid you haven’t helped me come out from under the blankets though. Okay our second selection from our poets on Writing.Com.


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Bright lit pumpkins
Withches glare
Something spooky
In the air

Little kids
Run to and fro
Weary parents
Start to slow

Treats and tricks
For all to snag
Wagons,Parents
Full of Bags

Homemade costumes
Store bought too
Demons,Monsters
Giant Shoe?

Then you're older
And you see
Its just not what it
Used to be.

Costumes seem
So dull and boring
Sorting candy
Leaves you snoring.

So finally
You've reached the place
Where Halloween
Is in last place.

Soap_Opera_Gurl Author IconMail Icon

         This is more my speed, peeking out from under the blankets is now allowed! Thank you for a modern version of what Halloween is about Soap_Opera_Gurl Author IconMail Icon. One or two more should finish up our exploration of Halloween on Writing.com.


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A lighted pumpkin, by the door.
His face is glowing, that's for sure.
There's cornstalks, tall, a scarecrow, too...
Some cobwebs and a spook ..say "Boo!"

But, don't be scared, it's just for fun
to see who is the bravest one.
You trick-or-treat for special eats
chocolate goodies, yummy treats.

Just a holiday of fall
As autumn rains descend on all
with just a hint of winter's snow
to make you bundle up, you know...

So, join the fun, and dress up, too
You just might win a prize or two
and all the parties are such fun
like bobbing apples, one by one.

So, take your light, and venture out
with other kids, to sing and shout
and take the hayride, have the fun.
Soon Halloween will be all done,

And old man winter on his way
will whistle in to stop and say
'Shewwwww! fall is over...winter's come
Another year is said and done.

Then New Year's starts it all again
that's when we say 'Remember when'
We watched the leaves, in color, fall
and Halloween ...most fun of all!...

tucket

         Thank you tucket finally I can stop shaking and start enjoying Halloween again. Now as I look forward to little monsters knocking at my door I will leave you with one last taste of the season.



Traces of Autumn
by Vivian Gilbert Zabel

Elegantly gowned trees shed their cloaks,
Flooding the ground with a multi-hued quilt
Which weaves a formless pattern,
Smothering the carpet beneath.

Crisp breezes tickle noses
With haunting memories of smoldering leaves
Beneath azure jeweled skies
Teased by veils of misty clouds.

Echoes of cheers, some of jeers,
Escape bleacher-lined fields nearby
Where weary warriors do fight,
Trying a pigskin prize to win.

As chills invade, shivers invoke,
Creating a burning need for fires’ flames,
Tiny tots dream of goblins grim
While pumpkins beam gruesome grins.



         Thank you Viv, for reminding us that October and autumn are about more than just Halloween. Yet surely the grandest of all days in this month culminate on All Hallows Eve. If I were to dedicate this newsletter to anyone, it would have to be my dad. He was born on October 30th and died sixty two years later on October 31st. There are plenty of odd goings on at this time of year. I remember in my senior year of high school I lost my purse. It was later found in an open grave by the police who were trying to break up a teenage party in the cemetary. Took me an hour to convince them I had not been there.

         That wraps up another newsletter for me. I hope you found it interesting and that the poets have entertained you. If they did, then they are truly great poets. Now as you go about your Halloween preparations, you might think about these poems and poets and the wonderfully twisted imaginations they have.

         Tip of the Day: Hmmm how about don’t let any witches cast a spell on you. Might be hard to write your poetry if you’re a frog.


         Next month: Love Poetry. I am always at your service.

         Becky L Simpson


Editor's Picks

         The following members of Writing.Com are some of my favorite poets on Writing.Com. They exhibit and understanding and skill that, simply put, amaze me. I hope those I have forgotten will forgive me, but as time goes on and my memory prods, me this list will change.

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SUGGESTED READINGS:

         I call these poets and poems works of the week. Some will be by cases of all colors, as skill is not determined by your case color. Just five or six poems I think you might enjoy.

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A poem about Medusa I wrote in Latin class (2000) for Christmas/Halloween.
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Ask & Answer

Questions and comments from last week, my thanks to those who wrote in:


Submitted By: ldylore
Submitted Comment:
A beautifully done newsletter. I had heard of using poetry as a form of therapy (I've done so myself to understand thoughts and emotions I couldn't express clearly), but I never knew it was actually recognized.

It was also a nice selection of enjoyable reads. I look forward to the next one ^_^



ldyloreThank you for the compliment, I do try to make them interesting. It is a great pleasure to me when people enjoy the newsletters. I should point out that we have four very good editors for the newsletters. – hugs Becky

Submitted By: mousybrown
Submitted Comment:
Thank you for the beautiful poetry you shared in this newsletter. It is all very touching.
Janne

Thank you Janne, your encouraging words are uplifting and assuring. Have to wonder sometimes if I am on target with these newsletters. Your words assure me I am headed in the right direction. – Hugs Becky


Submitted By:daycare
Submitted Comment:
Excellent job Becky. I often write when I need an outlet. You have provided the reader with some very well researched tips. Thanks so much!!!

Wendie


Wendie,

Always a pleasure to hear from you and I know from reading in your port that you are quite a poet yourself. Thanks for the kind comments. – hugs Becky

Submitted By: Helloooo there! Author IconMail Icon
Submitted Comment:
LOL, I've written therapy poetry a few times and didn't even know that there was such a thing! For that matter, I didn't even know that there was a whole organization! Thanks for the information. I also would like the let you know that the web address wouldn't work for me. Thanks for a great newsletter!
Dancin Angel



Angel,

Yes I seem ill equipped to get the web address right, though I try to be accurate. The correct address is: http://www.poetrytherapy.org/ thanks for pointing out the error. Thank you for your very kind comments they really make my day. – Hugs Becky


Submitted By: crystaldreams Author IconMail Icon
Submitted Comment:
Becky- I must applaud this newsletter, I enjoyed it from start to end. I get confused on all the different style's of poetry & so many guide lines to follow. But I understood this one. Writing to release emotions from within, is the best therapy found. Thank you for a wonderful newsletter that reminds us why we write in the first place! crystaldreams



crystaldreams Author IconMail Icon,

Often when I read newsletters the subject of a particular style is lost on me. Not because the newsletter is not well written, but as you have pointed out there are so many to chose from and to try and remember. My suggestion is get the basics right and let your emotions and thoughts flow. Thank you for the kind comments. – hugs Becky


Submitted By: Feywriter Author IconMail Icon
Submitted Comment:
One of my all-time favorite poems on writing.com is

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Title: Gentle Love
Description: Married love is more than romance; it's the melding of two into one.
By: Vivian Gilbert Zabel (115)

. It's a beautiful tribute to love, with perfect word choice and flow. I read it three months ago, and it still sits in my favorites.



Feywriter Author IconMail Icon,

I could not agree with you more. Viv is definitely one of my favorites, but I must caution you there are literally thousands of wonderful poets on the Writing.Com site. My subject for next month is going to be love poetry and it is my intent to share classic, web, and Writing.Com poetry. It will be an effort to contrast the ability of our poets with those of other sites. – Hugs Becky



Submitted By: reblackwell
Submitted Comment:
Greetings, Becky,

I did a web search for the National Association of Poetry Therapy; the actual web address is http://www.poetrytherapy.org/index.html. The organization is a professional one with a credentialing process in becoming a poetry therapist. It's a very interesting site.

Peace,
Robert


reblackwell,

Okay Robert you caught me. I goofed. Included above is the correct address according to my latest web search. Thank you for reading and correcting me when I goof. You are an interesting and wonderfully talented poet. Glad you enjoy reading the newsletter. – Hugs Becky



To the rest of you kind readers who made comments about July’s newsletter; thank you. If it were not for your kind words I would be inclined to find another way to spend the time I spend here.

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