Noticing Newbies: August 08, 2012 Issue [#5194]
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 This week: Are you a techie?
  Edited by: Brooke Author IconMail Icon
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1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
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About This Newsletter


The Noticing Newbies Newsletter's goal is to make the newer members feel welcome and encourage them with useful information and/or links to make navigating Writing.com easier. Writing.com members of all ages and even veteran members can find useful information here. If you have specific questions, try visiting "Writing.Com 101Open in new Window. and/or "Noticing NewbiesOpen in new Window..

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Letter from the editor


Embrace Technology and Learn

Some people swear by pencil and paper, others would be lost without their laptop and external hard drive (waves my hand in the air). While not everyone is a 'techie' as they're called, there are valuable things that fall under that umbrella. I thought I'd share a handful of sites that can help you learn and grow as a writer.

Basic techies could benefit from this very simple program that allows you to track your goals AND your bad habits as well. At the click of a button you can not only keep track but see a chart of how you're doing as well at Joe's Goals  Open in new Window..

Most writers love words and like you, you may have an online dictionary and thessaurus linked in your toolbar. But what if you're visual and learn easier through graphics? Well then you may like VisuWords  Open in new Window. where you can look up the meanings and also parts of speech but in a different, more visual, way. Parts of speech are labeled through colors, synonyms and antonyms are also listed. Check it out and let me know what you think.

Are you one of those people who swear you'll gouge out your eyes before you join Twitter? Well get those spoons ready because here is something you'd never guess. It's a great place to ... (yeah fill in the blank could be dangerous here) learn. Yes, I said you can learn something on Twitter. Many people think of actors and actresses on their telling us their every move. While it may be fun for a few moments to look up your favorite celebrities, what I'm talking about is authors. Do you realize how many well-known authors are on Twitter? A LOT! I discovered Warren Ellis  Open in new Window. there and Amazon.com immediately got a little richer because I bought more than a handful of his work. Do you like Joe Hill  Open in new Window. or Tess Gerritsen  Open in new Window. or even this lady, you might have heard of her, JK Rowling  Open in new Window.. You can even follow writers that you know, like Mara McBain  Open in new Window.. Some authors twitter feeds aren't all that exciting but then you come across ones like Frank Delaney  Open in new Window. that share daily writing tips that are not only useful but really interesting.

Last but certainly not least, Do you have grammar questions? My favorite site and one I recommend to everyone so they can check out is Grammar Girl  Open in new Window. There are hundreds of small articles on every possible question you have. The site is easy to search and even has podcasts if you'd prefer. *Bigsmile*

Do you have a valuable website you'd like to share with everyone? Leave me a comment in the box at the bottom of this newsletter and I'll print it in the next issue. *Thumbsup*

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You can see some of Frank Delaney's tips by checking out our own Joy Author Icon's blog in the entry entitled: "A Twitter Mentor Open in new Window..

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Editor's Picks


I'm featuring some work from authors that just caught my eye. I hope you enjoy them as much as I did. *Smile*

 Rachelle - Short Story Open in new Window. [E]
short story set in south Louisiana -not completed-
by Renee Author Icon

Excerpt:
I inherited the plantation while my father was busy trying to run the world from his small corner of his study selling large plots of land to rich men. Not much that I could say would stop him from sending me out into the bayou country to "tidy up" as he called it, what is now the greatest possession I own. When I got here there wasn't much to really do other than what seemed to me like tear down everything that had been done by the previous owner and start from scratch. I was used to people coming in and doing the work while you told them what color walls you wanted, not visiting the lumber yard to pick out what wood would hold up best for the floors.


~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
Alarms sounded, blending with the voice that echoed down the corridor and through the cells, demanding that all prisoners were to return to their cells. The call was barely heard over the yelling and fighting of the other inmates, who rioted against the guards throughout the prison. The man sat alone in his cell doodling in his notepad, acutely aware that his door was open and ignoring all the commotion outside. He knew exactly how it would end.


~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
It is the land which, through the years, the brave aspired to;
Whose shores with open arms have welcomed every creed and hue;
Where all ideas of "right and wrong" our forebears could devise
Have yielded and adapted in the name of compromise.


~*Star*~

 A Fair Trade Open in new Window. [E]
This is a short story about a young girl who's never been kissed.
by Beatriz Alayon Author Icon

Excerpt:
Oh great! Valentine's Day is tomorrow and once again I'm alone, Maggie thought.What is wrong with me? Why can't I find true love? Maggie had long, thick, red hair with piercing blue eyes. She was seventeen years old and had fully grown into her feminine curves. The pain of her loneliness was too much to bear for any amount of time and she wanted to escape. So, she decided to distract herself with her favorite hobby...


~*Star*~

 Deafening Tick Open in new Window. [E]
A girl is in the hospital awaiting news of her sister after they were both in a car crash
by Unnatural_Selection Author Icon

Excerpt:
My paces were swift and direct, heals clicking against the tile floor below me as I walked a straight line. To long had I been here, walking the length of the same small room counting the time and waiting for someone to come out and tell me what was going on, if everything was okay. My arms wrapped around my middle instinctively as if to comfort myself. My ghostly grey eyes flickered towards the clock once more, it's slow painful ticking taking a toll on my sanity.


~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
You were often so distant, so removed, so distraught
And you were not very comforted by the man that you sought

I would have bought you carnations, brought comfort to alleviate your pain
To help you get past the morbid, to get past your own rain

But you would not allow me to soothe the hurt in your heart
I made every effort for us not to part

~*Star*~

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by A Guest Visitor

Excerpt:
For 20 years it was all about her as she roamed, played and slept under our roof, entertaining and pesting us equally. She was there ignoring us during all of our trials and tribulations as well as the good times. I will miss preparing the surface of her bony noggin with my affectionate rubs that flattened her cute ears. It always amused me the way the little rascal endured the daily head pops she knew would inevitably follow the head rubbing.

This then is a record of what it was like to live with Ralph


~*Star*~

The Smell of You Open in new Window. [ASR]
When good smells go bad. . .
by Kiwifruit Author Icon

Excerpt:
Everyone has a different smell; their own special scent which sets them apart, however slightly, from the throngs of suited workers or uniform students. Some people smell sweet, others slightly bitter; some unlucky people smell like they haven't showered for days even if they have, while others always manage to carry their own subtle perfume like delicate butterfly wings.

But there's nothing quite like the smell of you.


~*Star*~

 Chess Pieces  Open in new Window. [ASR]
Ever had the urge to tell someone just how you feel? Well you're not the only one. (Short)
by Feeding-on-Fiction Author Icon

Excerpt:
I can't ever win this dreaded battle, no matter how hard I've truly tried! Some would say I am like the queen of the familiar chessboard who always keeps on fighting, with or without a king fighting by me side; however never can I win as I stand, single-handedly, my heavy heart hounding inside of my chest like a room bursting of famished lions raging, pounding into the cage of my ribs...

Lungs filled with anticipation.


~*Star*~

The Tunnel Open in new Window. [E]
A man finds himself in a strange location with strange people and is faced with a choice.
by Thomas Reagan Author Icon

Excerpt:
A tunnel looms ahead. The car is rolling towards it. I am at the wheel and there is a woman sitting next to me. I look back and there are two identical men in the back seat of the car. Between them is a small boy. I notice a sign on the smooth granite wall above the entrance to the tunnel. "Warning-Dark," it reads. I switch the small grey knob on the left side of the wheel into the "On" position. My headlights explode in light, preparing me and my passengers for the ride ahead.


~*Star*~



 
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Ask & Answer


I received some wonderful feedback to my last newsletter [#5147] "Accepting Feedback GraciouslyOpen in new Window. and I'm proud to share it with you.

From Winnie Kay Author Icon
Your newsletter regarding how to receive and respond to reviews of our work is excellent advice, Brooke. Writers can be a bit... well... sensitive. It's important to step back and look objectively at our fellow writers' opinions, swallow our pride, and graciously respond to our reviewers' input. Thanks for bringing this topic to our attention.

I couldn't agree more. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. *Smile*

From BIG BAD WOLF is Merry Author Icon submitted this item: "Dragon's EyesOpen in new Window.
Some reviews are just plain negative- first one I got for "Dragon's Eyes" was basically a list of reasons as to why a human couldn't kill a dragon- saying that said dragon had to be the size of a horse for anyone over the age of five to believe it, and take the story seriously. The guy even cited several stories for his reasoning, like "Beowulf"- saying that the hero didn't kill the dragon, and that his men made that part up.

Hello! A story is meant to entertain people- if they don't like it, they don't have to read it, or rate and review it, and give it a low rating.

Eh, can't please everyone.

That's so right! It's so nice to see a comment from you - I really appreciate you sharing your experiences. I'm glad my newsletter resonating with you enough to share your experiences. *Thumbsup*

From richardhead
to Brooke,
There is a warning light that goes on.
What is the difference between Political correctness and the truth? I'm asking because I'm not sure. I do know this: I have an opinion based on something other than ego identification. Since it's not based on just me I could assume it had or has value. I've noticed so many reviews that are worthless. In many cases I'm not sure the reviewer read what the writer wrote? Pretense?
What a review boils down to is one persons opinion. I know as a writer, I would like to have that one persons opinion without being censored, modified, governed or sedated by political correctness! Hey, he/she took a chance and read something that I wrote. It would be nice to hear why he/she liked it or hated it in their own words! Wouldn't you agree? Marlin

To me political correctness is more edited speech than anything. It's taking care to choose the correct word so you won't offend someone. However, some people take it to the point of extreme and it becomes utter nonsense. I do agree with your statement, it would be nice to hear what they liked and what they didn't. I wish reviewers would be more clear and not be so afraid to offend sometimes. Honesty is valuable.

From C.Evil Author Icon
I think learning to accept a well done review can be hard at times. The first lesson is to learn to simply thank the person, wait a fews days and read it again. This was a great article about how to accept and give reviews.

That's great advice! *Thumbsup*

From Jeff Author Icon
Wonderful article, Brooke! Good, practical advice for people interpreting feedback of their work... and it's so true; sometimes the criticisms we're most offended by are the ones most in need of addressing. *Wink*

Thanks Jeff, As always, I appreciate your support and thoughts.

From bertiebrite hoping for peace Author Icon
I sincerely wish that everyone on this site would or could read this newsletter. I am not so much a newbie, and I have a very thick skin, but I have recently received a very acidic review from someone, not because the work was filled with errors, but because the subject matter offended them. The reviewer went on to be quite insulting toward my work and myself even saying that it was not their job as a reviewer to correct my errors. Like I said, I have a thick skin, but others who are here and just starting out are highly sensitive to feedback. I urge everyone to watch what they say and how they say it. If you don't like a piece, don't read it. If you think you are going to insult, don't review . . . Just Sayin'.

I can understand where you're coming from completely. I had a friend here who used to get reviews like that. Very simply stated reviews that said things like - I liked your story but I don't like vampires so I gave it a two." Well why did you read a vampire story then? Things like that make no sense to me. Thanks for writing in. I appreciate you! *Smile*

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