 Action/Adventure: May 02, 2012 Issue [#5025] |
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This week: Memories, Good or Bad Edited by: Leger~  
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Memories
Character memories can be just like your own. A character isn't going to remember every minute detail about their past. Think of memory like a painted clapboard house. Recent memory is like fresh paint, gleaming in every detail and fresh in the memory. Every nook, cranny and even the gingerbread detail is remembered exactly. But as the memory/house ages, the paint begins to deteriorate, the paint cracks - not so fresh and vibrant as before. Small details are fuzzy and difficult to remember. "Was it April or May?"
Then time passes and larger chips fall to the ground. Most memory is retained but small parts are missing. Perhaps the unpleasant moment in an otherwise experience. Like a drop of wine on a party dress, you now remember the lovely restaurant, the engaging conversation, but not the stain. A friend might pick up the chip and remind your character. "Oh, I remember that yellow dress, a shame that stain never came out."
Perhaps the only thing retained is a bad experience, like a fire. The clapboard house carries the obvious scar that everyone remembers. No one looks at the house any longer, only seeing the blackened mark on the abandoned building. All the happy connection is broken and lost. Previous memories erased in one horrific moment. "Tsk, the Lee family, I wonder where they moved?"
More time passes and only bits of the old paint remains. The weathered clapboard house, bleached nearly white from the sun, standing tall against the elements. These are the fond memories - memories of things we remember from our childhood, no longer clear and beautiful, but looked at with respect for the ageless beauty it has become. Memories of swinging on the old tire swing with our bestest friend in first grade. Our first kiss. The moment our child is born. "You were so pink and screamed like a banshee! I fell in love with you right then."
Character memory should work the same. A character couldn't tell every detail of something that happened decades ago. Some things are lost, and best forgotten.
Write on!
This month's question: How do you use character memories as a tool? In flashbacks? How else?
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This month's question: How do you use character memories as a tool? In flashbacks? How else?
Last month's question: What kind of transport do you like to give your characters?
~ Aqua ~  responds: About the question, it depends. I would prefer horse riding if old styled story and spaceships if it is a fantasy story.
believer10 replies: Transportation has always been nothing to me. My characters sail, fly, or walk. I don't even think about it.
sergeantc answers: I generally give my characters some sort of car. For most of what I write, that suits their needs the best. I will use other means when necessary, such as planes or trains, but overall, I go with the car.
BIG BAD WOLF Feeling Thankful  submits: Transportation depends on setting- sometimes its on foot, sometimes its with space ships.
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