Fantasy: September 29, 2010 Issue [#3988]
<< September 22, 2010Fantasy Archives | More From This Day | Print This IssueOctober 6, 2010 >>

Newsletter Header
Fantasy


 This week: Minions
  Edited by: Robert Waltz Author IconMail Icon
                             More Newsletters By This Editor  Open in new Window.

Table of Contents

1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions

About This Newsletter

"No, no. No, your terrifically smooth one, it is the epitome of ankles. To touch such an ankle would be-- but I'm not touching, I'm backing away"
         -Glory's minion, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Season 5

"Sacrificing minions: Is there any problem it can't solve?"
         -Xykon ( http://www.cafepress.com/orderofthestick/2111604 )


Word from our sponsor

ASIN: B01DSJSURY
Amazon's Price: $ 5.99


Letter from the editor

MINIONS


         I've decided to start October a bit early this year. Hell, the stores have had Halloween decorations up since June; don't judge ME.

         Next month perhaps I'll delve more into the possibilities of Horror/Scary crossovers with Fantasy, but for now, I'll talk about one thing that Bad Guys in both genres tend to have at their (sometimes literal) disposal:

         Minions. Also known as toadies, flunkies, hirelings, servitors, etc.

         Not the cute ones from Despicable Me, either - though that was an excellent movie. I'm talking about the unholy army of darkness, here (as opposed to the army of dorkness one might encounter at a science fiction convention).

         Now, minions are often used as comic relief, much as they were in the aforementioned movie. And if they're used that way, that's great; I'm all for comic relief. Also, often the Good Guy has minions, too; they're just never called that. They're called silly things like "friends" or "companions" or "employees" or something a lot less dark. That's always bugged me, so one day I'm going to write a story where the protagonist has toadies, flunkies, hirelings, servitors, or whatever.

         But I digress. If not used for comic effect, then minions - either of the Good Guy or the Bad Guy (in this context, "guy" isn't gender-specific) - need a reason. Motivation. Not just purpose - their purpose is obviously to advance the plot (in terms of the writing) or further the aims of their leader (in terms of the story).

         When writing minions into a story, though, you need to know - even if you don't necessarily convey it to the reader - why they're working for their employer. The reason for this is simple: you need to know, for plot purposes, what it would take to turn their allegiance. One of the most effective plot twists, despite overuse, is the Betrayal. It works because it immediately changes the reader's perception of everyone's relationship, and stories are all about relationships.

         And the defection of a minion is a cause for despair if it's a minion of the protagonist - and a cause for triumph if it's a minion of the antagonist. What's really fun is when you have a minion of the antagonist seem to turn, but actually end up finding out that she was working for the antagonist all along.

         So, what are some possible motivations for minions? Well, the simplest one is: money. But it's also the easiest to turn. If the bad guy's paying the minion $2 an hour, and the good guy offers her $2.50, the minion has motivation to turn. This is not good writing.

         Better writing involves getting inside the minion's head. "I'm working for the villain because if I don't, she'll kill my whole family." "I'm working for the good guy because I have a sense of honor." "I'm just in it for the money, but I have the integrity to see the job through instead of turning traitor." "I'm secretly in love with my employer and will do whatever he tells me to do." "Isn't my boss great at mind control? I barely even notice it, myself!" That sort of thing.

         Or, like My minions, perhaps they're in it for the sheer joy of being associated with someone as awesome as I am.

         In short, don't make the minions two-dimensional. Even if it's only in your head, know why they're doing what they're doing. Your readers will thank you for it.

         Your minions will have no choice but to like it.


Editor's Picks

To get us in the mood for October, let's look at a genre I rarely link here: Gothic. While often regarded as more tangential to the Horror genre, there's enough crossover with the conventions of Fantasy that it's worth a look.

 Light and Shadow Open in new Window. [13+]
What is real? 'Shadow people, weird tales cover' WC-454, a love in the shadows
by rjsimonson Author Icon


 Invalid Item Open in new Window. []

by A Guest Visitor


 
There Is Beauty  Open in new Window. [13+]
Love Shines In A Dark World
by InkWellspring66 Author Icon


 The Catacombs of Catastrophe Open in new Window. [ASR]
Gothic story.
by JCasto Author Icon


The Avatar Awakens Open in new Window. [13+]
The Knights of Ma-R prepare for a final battle with Lord Bellemarr.
by Joshiahis Author Icon


 Ashen Angel Open in new Window. [E]
Rhyming, 6 stanza poem.
by L.Naylor Author Icon


 The Land of Shadows Open in new Window. [13+]
She drifts in the land of shadows...
by ⭐Princette♥PengthuluWrites Author Icon


 The Gift Open in new Window. [13+]
A very short ghost Story, involving a life-like statue
by Anouska Foster Author Icon

 
Submit an item for consideration in this newsletter!
https://www.Writing.Com/go/nl_form

Word from Writing.Com

Have an opinion on what you've read here today? Then send the Editor feedback! Find an item that you think would be perfect for showcasing here? Submit it for consideration in the newsletter!
         https://www.Writing.Com/go/nl_form

Don't forget to support our sponsor!



Ask & Answer

Last time, in "Fantasy Newsletter (September 1, 2010)Open in new Window., I wrote about the importance of learning basics such as spelling, grammar and punctuation.


jackhatchet:
I think you did a good job making this you always have to know the basics before you do anything in life.. So thumbs up for you dude

         While you do need to know the basics, don't let that stop you from writing - just be sure to edit it!


atwhatcost:
Thylacine asked for magazines that accept short stories for Fantasy, and you suggested some of us might know. I could find one I found for fairy tales, and can give info on others through Facebook, but it would help if we knew which kind of fantasy. My fantasy tends towards urban fantasy featuring stuffed animals. Hows that for a sub-genre? *BIGSMILE*

But, that's an idea for a newsletter, ask and we can all work towards sending in our sugesstions for magazines that publish our sub-genres. After all, isn't "Fantasy" one of the broadest genres for writing?


         stuffed... animals? Ohhhhhhhkaaaaaayyyyy.


BIG BAD WOLF is Howling Author Icon
Sometimes, pictures are good fantasy things, and the captions can be quite funny. (Included item: "My Big Bad Wolf ImagesOpen in new Window. [E]}

         Thanks for sharing!


Joy Author Icon:
I loved your first sentence, Robert. It could be the beginning of something big. *Smile* *hint*
And you touched a very important point. We can't be careful enough; yet, we'll all stumble once in a while.
Thanks for a great newsletter. *Smile*


         That's right; I'm going to be a rock star, baby. You knew me when.


Cynaemon Author Icon:
Thank you for a great newsletter. I totally agree with you that spelling and technical errors really detract from one's writing. I have run across some items that are so poor in the spelling and technical department that I don't even bother to read and rate them.

         I hear that a lot.


cafeaulait:
:When reading over my work, I find it helps if I print it off and even read it out loud. Sometimes I think we get so used to reading things quickly on the screen that our eye skids over the errors in spelling, the inconsistencies in plot and the grammar mistakes.

         That's true, especially with poetry, but also with any type of writing. It does take time, though. But sometimes you need to take the time to polish the writing. Again, I don't mean to imply that someone who has trouble with these sorts of things can't write. Technical issues are among the easiest to fix. But you gotta DO it.


dstaley:
Hurray for pointing out this need! I am guilty of errors in grammar and spelling, but, man, I sure appreciate folks who at least try to make their piece readable. Thanks for the reminder!

         We all make mistakes. The key is to go back and find them and fix them. And, of course, to get to the point where the mistakes are minimized and we can concentrate on other aspects of writing. It's a never-ending process of learning. Anyone who thinks they've learned enough... hasn't.


LJPC - the tortoise Author Icon:
Amen, to your call for better grammar, Robert. Reading stories with many mistakes is exactly like the metaphor you used - listening to out-of-tune music. If you want to play, study and practice. If you want to write, learn the rules. There are plenty of places online to get help and learn. There's no excuse for writers who shrug and say, "Well, I'm just no good at grammar", make no effort, yet expect to be reviewed. *Blush* Yup, it's pet peeve of mine.
-- Laura


         Yep!


LDSmom Author Icon:
Playing guitar isn't as hard at it seems at first, once you get your fingers toughened up. I took lessons as a teen, but I quit playing in my 20's. Now I am in my 40's and working at picking it back up. Keep practicing; you will get it.
Good advice on the grammar, too. Commas are my pitfall.


         Grammar, spelling and punctuation aren't as hard as they seem, either. Once you know the rules, you know them. And at least you know where your weakness is (commas). That means you know what to concentrate on!


*Writing* *Writing* *Writing*


A quick plug - if you're planning to do NaNoWriMo this year, in Fantasy or Science Fiction or whatever genre, I can't recommend this activity enough:

FORUM
October Novel Prep Challenge Open in new Window. (13+)
A month-long novel-planning challenge with prizes galore.
#1474311 by Brandiwyn🎶 Author IconMail Icon


*Writing* *Writing* *Writing*



         And that's it for this time - tune in next month to see what else I do for Halloween! Until then,

DREAM ON!!!

*Bullet* *Bullet* *Bullet* Don't Be Shy! Write Into This Newsletter! *Bullet* *Bullet* *Bullet*

This form allows you to submit an item on Writing.Com and feedback, comments or questions to the Writing.Com Newsletter Editors. In some cases, due to the volume of submissions we receive, please understand that all feedback and submissions may not be responded to or listed in a newsletter. Thank you, in advance, for any feedback you can provide!
Writing.Com Item ID To Highlight (Optional):

Send a comment or question to the editor!
Limited to 2,500 characters.
Word from our sponsor
ASIN: B0CJKJMTPD
Product Type: Kindle Store
Amazon's Price: $ 4.99

Removal Instructions

To stop receiving this newsletter, click here for your newsletter subscription list. Simply uncheck the box next to any newsletter(s) you wish to cancel and then click to "Submit Changes". You can edit your subscriptions at any time.


<< September 22, 2010Fantasy Archives | More From This Day | Print This IssueOctober 6, 2010 >>

This printed copy is for your personal use only. Reproduction of this work in any other form is not allowed and does violate its copyright.