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 This week: Give Your Characters the Right Cut
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A beautifully complex story is often complex not because of a complicated surface but because of an impressive depth.
Jerome Stern


There is no rule on how to write. Sometimes it comes easily and perfectly: sometimes it's like drilling rock and then blasting it out with charges."
Ernest Hemingway




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Letter from the editor

Make Sure Your Characters Have the Right Cut


This newsletter was inspired by a comment I received. Thanks, Sherri!

faithjourney
Comment: Thanks for the great newsletters on dimensions in characters. The way I see it, human beings are like diamonds. Our job as writers is to hold them up to the light and let those facets sparkle, shine, and throw out a rainbow of colors.

A great analogy, Sherri, & I'm taking advantage of it this week--thank you! *Smile*

Consider this:

A diamond is a crystal made up entirely of carbon atoms
The graphite that you commonly find in pencils is also made of pure carbon


*Bullet* The pencils of writers contain the stuff of diamonds.

Diamonds are very tough, meaning that they do not easily break, chip or crack.
*Bullet* A good protagonist and antagonist?

A newly mined rough diamond looks more like a piece of glass washed up on the beach than like the polished gems sold in jewelry stores. Bringing out their beauty requires the skill and art of a trained diamond cutter.

*Bullet* A simple one-dimensional character becomes a three-dimensional that lives and breathes in the hands of a trained writer.

I will take it a bit further. I think our job as writers is to get our characters to the final state of shine and let the readers hold them up to the light and see the rainbow sparkle. Writers do the hard work, readers reap the results. First the diamonds must be blasted from the blocks of rock that hold them in, sort of like coaxing a character from our imagination. It's a fallacy that diamonds can be freely picked up from the ground, all shiny and ready to use. Neither can characters.

Tunnels are constructed into the rock and blasted apart. The diamonds are then liberated from the rock just as a character is liberated from the writer's imagination. It isn't easy. It will then be crushed, scrubbed, cleaned, and processed.

Good characters go through a similar process. After a long, tedious process of development, their traits are finally shaped by the artist to allow personality to shine through. They come alive. They become a usable product for the setting the writer has in mind and they are remembered forever--just like diamonds.

The 4 C's: Each diamond is valued based upon the 4 C's; Cut, Carat, Clarity and Color.

Carat--The larger the Diamond, the rarer it is. Its size shows off a stone's fine colour and cut, and therefore its brilliance when viewed by the eye of the viewer and a recognizer.

*Bullet* Great characters are as rare. The more they are developed the more brilliant is their realism. Everything isn't put onto the page, but everything he is, is implied through his thoughts and decisions, and actions.

Cut-
This is considered to be a major aspect and has its own importance along with all other characteristics.

All other factors being similar, a badly cut diamond can be worth less than half the value of a well made stone. The proportions of a stone as well as its polish and precision of faceting determine how much of the diamond`s potential fire and beauty is visible, determine its value. Better cut diamonds and near ideal cut stones command a premium at the consumer market. The diamond cut will definitely have its influence on the sparkle, fire and brilliance, as well as its perceived size and even, to some degree its apparent colour. maximization for the diamond`s brilliance. A finely cut diamond will reflect light.

Symmetry, polish, and faceting are the precisely visible features of a cut and would be given an importance to the percentages of the depth, height and angles. Light should enter and exit a diamond through the top facets. A cut that is too shallow or too deep reflects it through the bottom facets, and lets the light leak out of the bottom or side of the gem. Properly aligned facets means light will enter the diamond and reflect back through the large top facet,

Diamonds are not at all easy to mine. In fact, more than 250 tons of ore need to be blasted, crushed and processed to yield just one carat of rough diamond! And of all the diamonds mined, only about 20% to 25% are gem-quality; the rest will eventually be used for technological and industrial purposes, or as abrasives.


*Bullet* Be sure your characters have the right cut. Don't let their light leak out the bottom or sides. Bring it out through their eyes--the windows to the soul.


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Joy Author Icon
Comment: Superb explanation of character dimensions, Esprit. I bet many writers, experienced or not, will benefit from reading this issue.

Thanks, Joy. I hope it helped.


Vivian Author Icon
Comment: Good explanation of dimension. ~~ Viv

Thank you, Viv!


faithjourney
Comment: Thanks for the great newsletters on dimensions in characters. The way I see it, human beings are like diamonds. Our job as writers is to hold them up to the light and let those facets sparkle, shine, and throw out a rainbow of colors.

Thanks for the inspiration, Sherri!
*Delight*

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Comment: The reality of a character is whatever the author chooses to disclose about him/her. Whatever the author omits is not part of that reality. The author's choices may be conscious or subconscious but, as long as the character appears on the page, the choices are made.

You're absolutely right, Doug. The author gets to decide every time. A riddle: If what was omitted was something a reader didn't need to know in order to understand that reality--was it really omitted--or was it just something that didn't apply so shouldn't be there?


billwilcox
Comment: Great Newsletter! I love writing characters in the Fourth Dimension: having traits that are supernatural in nature.

And I love reading those characters, I just don't know how to build them. I'll leave that topic for you to do and I'll read it. Thanks, Bill!
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