 For Authors: March 18, 2009 Issue [#2946] |
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Since I've been working with children's books for the past two years, I thought I'd address the issue of action and conflict in picture books.
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Action and Conflict in Children's Books
The June 2007 issue of The Writer included interesting articles about writing for children. Since I've been editing, formatting, and organizing children's stories and illustrations into books to be published since 2007 myself, I found the articles interesting and parallel to my own experiences and what I've found that children's stories need.
Just because a book is for children does not mean that it can be telling and not showing. In fact more showing through words as well as illustrations enhances the book. In every book, tension gets a child's attention, and conflict requires tension. Barbara Seuling ("HOW TO REFINE your picture book, page 38, The Writer, June 2007) says that an incident is not enough, that the author must turn it into a story with action. "...it is the element of tension that gets our interest. A story without something to worry the reader is just mildly interesting at best."
Yes, action adds interest and conflict. Children like action. They demand action. Not enough action results in lack of interest. Without action, where's the conflict and interest? It doesn't exist.
Speaking of action, Seuling and a speaker at the OWFI writing conference, Marion Hees, agree that writers should start with action almost immediately. Writers shouldn't start with exposition, at least not more than a sentence or two, before the action begins. Catching the listener's or reader's attention quickly means a better chance of keeping the attention.
Children enjoy conflict, a story with a character who has a dilemma. Writers need to incorporate conflict (tension plus action) in each story.
A few points for writing better children's stories
 Don't be afraid to use some unfamiliar words. Most children listen to picture books text; they don't read them. Therefore, vocabulary can be more exciting.
Be sure the story isn't too long, even though they can be up to 1,500 words. Seuling says, "Say what you have to say as succinctly as possible. Cut unnecessary words; avoid details that are unneeded or can be left to the illustrator; and write shorter sentences, selecting verbs with kick."
Exclamation points should be use seldom and only in dialogue. Clear writing helps avoid exclamation marks. No exclamation points are better than too many.
Avoid using ALL CAPS. If a character shouts, show that with words and how they are said.
Italics should be used only to show a character's thoughts.
As in any writing, action verbs need to be used. Passive voice or verbs and to be verbs should be avoided whenever possible.
Example; The girl was talking to her doll.
Improved: The girl talked to her doll.
A couple of things I read and heard I disagree with:
Avoid alliteration in names: Children love alliterative names. Adults
who decide what is published and what isn't are the ones who
dictate no alliteration. If writing for children, then I think we
should use devices that they enjoy - if used correctly.
Don't write in rhyme. I partially disagree. IF rhyme and rhythm are
used by someone who understands how to do so, then rhyme
holds children's attention.
Don't be afraid to write for children. Just be sure that the perspective is on a child's level, written for children rather than just about children but for adults. Action and conflict must be included to keep a child's attention. |
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Last month's issue was about setting writing goals. One I set, and forced myself to do, was to submit a novel to an agent. I received a rejection, which said that due to the current uncertainty of publishing, my manuscript was being returned to me. Oh, well, I did met the goal I set, and the rejection was different than most I've received, but in a way more fighting.
sarah.g
Your newsletter has really made me think that I should make some writing goals for this year, too.
Actually writing my goals has helped me keep on track better.
(salliemoffitt)
Since writers seem to be procrastinators by nature, setting goals is a good step toward avoiding writer's apathy. It is too easy for a writer to put things off indefinitely, but goals help keep us focused and moving forward. Good topic! Can't wait to see where your mind wonders next month. 
 My mind does seem to wonder, doesn't it?
{usert:kayjordan}
Great newletter, Viv. I really appreciate your insight into submitting manuscripts to agents. Thanks a million for this great info.
Kay Jordan
*sigh* I have more insight into submitting to agents than I ever wanted to have.
Little Scribbler 
I have one - write at least 4 pages each week.
At least you have a goal. I hope it works well for you and helps you succeed.
May your writing goals take you forward.
I'll see you next month, when we'll see where my mind wandered this time.
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