Action/Adventure: January 21, 2009 Issue [#2834]
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         I tried to watch a show on television the other night and finally turned it off. The action was too much and too unbelievable.

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         Action and adventure are needed in most writings so that the reader will stay interested. However, what if it’s too much, impossible? Any mature, discriminate reader will laugh or frown and leave the book or story or show. Let’s look at the plot of the show I tried to watch recently. In the twenty minutes I endured:

The hero fought four bad guys, and was winning, until another villain whacked him in the head with a 2 by 4, knocking the hero partially unconscious. As he lay on the ground, dazed, the other men left him with the prints of their shoes in his side and on his back. The man fought unconsciousness, crawled to a dumpster, and pulled himself to his feet.

As the protagonist struggled to get into his car, a shot rang out, and the poor man was slammed against the fender, a hole in his shoulder and blood pouring from the wound. He dodged behind the car, held his hand over the gunshot hole, and closed his eyes. “Wish I had my gun,” he muttered.

When no other shots came his way, the hero managed to get behind the wheel and drive to his girlfriend’s, who just happened to be a doctor. As she removed the bullet and bandaged his wounds, Girl-doctor told him he had to take care, that he wasn’t invincible.

The glass windows to the balcony crashed inward, and a man clothed in black, from his head to his feet, faced the couple, a knife in hand. The doctor screamed and scurried behind the couch (at least she had sense enough to take her cell phone with her and to call for help). The hero stumbles to his feet, grabs a pillow from the couch, and prepares to meet the antagonist with the knife. During the fight, our wounded hero is stabbed, but he still manages to disarm the attacker and knock him to the floor. He sits on the villain until the police arrive.

         Huh? That was just too much. I changed channels.

         When is too much too much? I could take any of the scenes and suspend belief enough to accept them in the plot, but all three, one on top of the other? Please.

         When we write anything with action and/or adventure, we need to be sure that readers can accept our plot and subplots as possible. Maybe they aren’t exactly plausible, but they need to be at least possible. Hmm … that advice is good advice to follow with any type writing.


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SantaBee Author IconMail Icon
         }Viv, You are so right about exclamation points. I learned the hard way about them. That's a great tip for aspiring writers. Do an edit just for exclamation points. It will pay off and improve one's writing. I've found that too many make the work over dramatic or even melodramatic and take away from what the author is trying to do.

         Overuse of exclamation points is actually lazy writing. In fact few are needed in good writing and then only in dialogue -- seldom used at all.

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         omg! i love that quote. great NL.

Dan Author IconMail Icon
         Thanks! I can't say I use 'between' or 'among' much - but the punctation issues around dialog always confuse me.
         I loved the quote; "A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author."

         That quote is one of my favorite, too, and it is so very true.

standingdeer
         I always find this newsletter LOADED with useful information and I am happy you continue to have it.
         Where can I find more information on Preposition use/abuse? Do you know of a book? A web site?
                              Thanks.
                              RubyStandingDEER

         I use a high school English text book, plus all my years of teaching and using grammar and punctuation. Here are some web sites that might help:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar
http://grammarstars.blogspot.com/2007/09/pronouns-as-objects-of-prepositions.htm...
http://englishplus.com/grammar/mistcont.htm


Franki Author IconMail Icon
         Quotation marks and where the commas, periods go have been a confusing issue for me. This article cleared it up. Thank you.

         I'm glad my article helped.

Time to say goodbye for another month. Hope your adventures are all good ones.

Viv

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