 Poetry: January 02, 2008 Issue [#2144] |
  Poetry
This week: Edited by: larryp
More Newsletters By This Editor 
1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions
Past, Present, Future
Tell me, tell me, smiling child,
What the past is like to thee ?
'An Autumn evening soft and mild
With a wind that sighs mournfully.’
Tell me, what is the present hour ?
'A green and flowery spray
Where a young bird sits gathering its power
To mount and fly away.’
And what is the future, happy one ?
'A sea beneath a cloudless sun ;
A mighty, glorious, dazzling sea
Stretching into infinity.’
~~Emily Brontë
English poet ~~ 1818-1848 |
| ASIN: B01FST8A90 |
Product Type: Toys & Games
|
Amazon's Price: $ 24.95
|
|
The holidays are behind us and we've entered a new year. Many people have made resolutions, but I find the older I get, the fewer resolutions I make, but I still enjoy trying new things. I think this is how we stay young of heart. With this in mind, I would like to introduce a poetry form. Some of you may be familiar with the form, so it will be a refresher for you.
The form is called Minute Poetry, probably because it consists of 60 total syllables. I could find very little on-line about this form, but I think the form is fascinating and lends itself to the creation of beautiful poems. The Minute Poetry form has a three short stanzas and an easy rhyming scheme.
According to www.shadowpoetry.com, minute poetry has three stanzas and each stanza has a set syllable count of 8-4-4-4 for a total of 60 syllables for the entire poem. The rhyme scheme is couplet rhyming aabb, ccdd, eeff. The rhyming scheme of the Minute Poetry poem would appear as follows:
xxxxxxxa
xxxa
xxxb
xxxb
xxxxxxxc
xxxc
xxxd
xxxd
xxxxxxxe
xxxe
xxxf
xxxf
However, the challenging part of the Minute Poetry form is that it requires iambic meter. I have held withheld this until now, because I didn't want to scare you away. Remember, this is a new year and possibly time to attempt something new and challenging. Iambic meter once terrified me, but the more I learn of it, the greater the challenge becomes (and the more exciting). The Minute Poetry form is a good place to start writing poetry in iambic meter, because of the short eight and four syllable lines.
In as simple terms as possible, iambic meter is counting syllables, except that every-other syllable is an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable. For instance, with (x) representing an unstressed syllable and (i) representing a stressed syllable, here is how an eight-syllable line would be scanned in iambic meter.
x / x / x / x /
(x) unstressed - (/) stressed
The four syllable lines would scan as:
x / x /
Stressed syllables usually stand out because they have long, rather than short, vowels, or because they have a different pitch or are louder than other syllables.
http://www.infoplease.com/ipa/A0903237.html
As an example, I will take a Minute Poetry poem I wrote recently and show the stressed syllables in bold print.
The Wooing
The path that leads to things not shown,
to trails unknown,
and tales untold...
has fate controlled?
Arcane, the shadows called and wooed
from solitude;
with minstrel's strum,
they begged me come.
And dare I follow, once coerced
by winds thus versed...
Or dast I stay
and waste this day?
©Larry Powers
'kansaspoet'
December 2007
Read the lines, one line at a time, aloud and try to distinguish the difference between the syllables in bold (stressed) and the other unstressed syllables. Do they sound sharper or crisper? It takes a while to develop an ear for iambic meter. I found a good way to learn more about iambic meter is to read some of the older classic poems written in iambic - reading them repeatedly, paying attention to sound of the stressed syllables in contrast to the sound of the unstressed syllables.
Iambic meter is not a perfect science. There will be variance in the way words sound and sometimes iambic meter will not be clear cut. Iambic meter is part of the art of poetry, and there are no scientific rules guiding it. Don't let iambic meter intimidate you. Like all things, we will become better with practice.
It's a new year; a time for trying new things. Give it a try – the Minute Poetry form - three short stanzas, an easy rhyme scheme, sixty total syllables, and the beginning of an understanding of iambic meter.
Understanding that iambic meter can be intimidating, here are a few links that may be helpful:
http://www.frostfriends.org/meter.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iambic_pentameter
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/gl_meter.html
http://www.electpress.com/loveandromance/page100.htm
http://www.cummingsstudyguides.net/xmeter.html
http://anitraweb.org/kalliope/rhythm1.html
Special Notice:
My contest "Invalid Item" is currently in Round 19; this round will end on January 19, 2008. If you decide to write a Minute Poetry poem, you may enter in the contest under prompt #12 (which has been created especially for this newsletter). Enter your Minute Poetry poem in the contest by the end of January 19; the one chosen as best representing the Minute Poetry form will be given an awardicom.
|
The following poems are not Minute Poetry poems, but they are written in iambic meter:
| |  | Invalid Item
This item number is not valid.
#1321128 by Not Available. |
| | | Invalid Item
This item number is not valid.
#1005829 by Not Available. |
| | | Invalid Item
This item number is not valid.
#1328255 by Not Available. |
| | | Invalid Item
This item number is not valid.
#1254138 by Not Available. |
| | | Invalid Item
This item number is not valid.
#1255462 by Not Available. |
| | | Invalid Item
This item number is not valid.
#892353 by Not Available. |
The following poem is a Minute Poetry poem, but dont let the meter fool you. Kate chose to write her poem in trochaic meter which is the opposite of iambic meter - a stressed syllable followed by an unstressed syllable.
A pretty poem, with wise advice
| | | Invalid Item
This item number is not valid.
#1224212 by Not Available. |
|
Have an opinion on what you've read here today? Then send the Editor feedback! Find an item that you think would be perfect for showcasing here? Submit it for consideration in the newsletter!
https://www.Writing.Com/go/nl_form
Don't forget to support our sponsor!
| ASIN: 1945043032 |
|
Amazon's Price: $ 13.94
|
|
bluesky  
Thank you, Kansaspoet, for this outstanding newsletter. I relished every quote and the discussion of winter reflection.
Surely I'm not the only one who just happened to be in the ideal mood to re-read one of Emily's finest works.
I chuckled at Whitman's usual optimism. Even in the dead of winter, he's already peeking around the corner for spring's arrival, awaiting the birdsong and blossoms.
Thank you,
~~bluesky
Pen Name 
Dear Larry,
I needed to read this issue highlighting Winter poetry by old and new authors. I am feeling a bit depressed by the dreariness of the post-Christmas winter. But your newsletter contained some fierce poetry. I reviewed and rated almost all of the WDC authors' highlighted items that you chose.
Sincerely,
Lois
I hope that each of you had a pleasant holiday season and I wish you an inspirational 2008.
Poetry Newsletter Editors:
Stormy Lady 
Red Writing Hood <3
larryp
Next week's editor:
Red Writing Hood <3
|
| ASIN: B07RKLNKH7 |
Product Type: Kindle Store
|
Amazon's Price: $ 0.99
|
|
To stop receiving this newsletter, click here for your newsletter subscription list. Simply uncheck the box next to any newsletter(s) you wish to cancel and then click to "Submit Changes". You can edit your subscriptions at any time.
|
This printed copy is for your personal use only. Reproduction
of this work in any other form is not allowed and does violate its copyright. |
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
