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This week: World-Building As Procrastination Edited by: Jeff  
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— Lloyd Alexander
About The Editor: Greetings! My name is Jeff and I'm your guest editor for this issue of the official Fantasy Newsletter! I've been a member of Writing.com since 2003, and have edited more than 400 newsletters across the site during that time. If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to contact me via email or the handy feedback field at the bottom of this newsletter! 
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World-Building As Procrastination
Writing can be really hard sometimes, and we all have our favorite forms of procrastination. Some of us find errands to run or things to do around the house. Others of us suddenly remember something we've been meaning to do for a long time and suddenly need to get around to it. Me? My favorite form of procrastination is research and development, because it helps me convince myself that I'm still "writing" when, in fact, I'm not really making meaningful progress in my goal of writing a story.
The seductive part about this type of procrastination is that it is so easy to convince yourself that you're being productive. Especially if you're writing in a genre like fantasy, there are so many elements of a secondary world to figure out! What's the geography like? How about the sociopolitical aspects of the world? What is religion like in your world? What languages do people speak? Is magic common or rare? Are there fantastical creatures or areas of the world that could be explored? What's the history of this place you've made up entirely in your own imagination and now need to make come alive on the page?
What's even more sinister about this form of procrastination is that you can argue that it does incrementally improve your writing by providing context and understanding that allow you to more fully realize the world you're writing about. But the question is whether it's worth the time you're spending doing it, and if that time spent is at the cost of the greater goal.
If you are concurrently working on world-building and also getting your words/pages done, that's one thing. But if you're putting off getting your words/pages done under the rationale that you just need to develop the world just a little bit more, you might be procrastinating ... especially if the words/pages are being put off for more than a few days or weeks at a time. Or if you're developing world-building that you know is only going to have a peripheral impact on your story. Like, say, spending dozens of hours developing an entire religious system when you're not currently anticipating that your story or characters will talk about religion with more than a passing reference.
The other adverse effect of procrastinating through world-building is then having a plethora of world-building information that you have spend considerable time developing ... and then feeling like you have to include it in your story even if the story doesn't call for it because you worked so hard on it. One of the great pitfalls of fantasy fiction is when an author is so in love with the secondary world setting they've created, that they don't want to (or feel they don't need to) edit things down and instead just write sprawling and unnecessary detail that detract from the narrative. Some fantasy readers do like to read thousand-page tomes with every minor detail spelled out an explained in intricate detail, but I'd argue that more readers prefer that character and story don't get derailed or take a backseat to details of the setting.
World-building is a crucial part of fantasy writing (and the part that many of us who are fans of the genre love the most!). But it can be a very fine line between world-building that creates a more immersive experience by fleshing out the world, and world-building that's being self-indulgent or used to avoid the hard work of actually telling an engaging story with compelling characters. Whenever you're looking at world-building and your writing process, it's worth asking the following two questions of yourself:
1. Is this world-building necessary to tell my story?
2. Am I spending an appropriate amount of time on it, based on how big of a role it will play in the story?
If the answer to both of the above questions is 'yes' then happy world-building! If the answer to either of those questions is 'no' or 'probably not' then it might be worth revisiting the amount of time you're spending on that aspect of the world-building and investing it somewhere more productive to your writing goals.
Until next time,
Jeff
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