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When opposites collide in your writing, you may be using juxtaposition. It’s a key element of the poetry toolbox and, when used effectively, can change the entire mood or tone of a poem. It can add complexity, depth, and intrigue to your poetry, resulting in visually and thematically rich poems that resonate on a deeper emotional level.
Understanding Juxtaposition – We Already Know They Are Different!
At its core, juxtaposition is the art of placing things next to each other to invite comparison or highlight contrast. This can involve words, phrases, ideas, images, or even entire themes within a poem. The power of juxtaposition lies in its ability to create tension, deepen meaning, and engage the reader by making them think more critically about the relationships between the elements presented.
One of the greatest misunderstandings about juxtaposition is the belief that it’s enough to slap a few opposites together, whether on the same or subsequent line. Your readers already understand the basic concept of opposites, and strong poetry usually does more than state the obvious. The goal isn’t just to highlight differences but to explore the dynamic interplay between them.
For example, this poem is nice enough and has plenty of opposites. But it lacks the depth of high-level juxtaposition (and to be clear, I’m guilty of falling into this trap, so this is not directed at anyone in particular):
The warm sun lit the forest path,
While in the shadows, darkness lurked like a predator,
The naïve flowers bloomed with joy and color,
As the relentless storm clouds crept over the mountain.
Like I said, it’s not a catastrophe. But now look at “The Hollow Men” by T.S. Eliot:
We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats' feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar
Hollow vs. stuffed creates both the sense of emptiness and fullness, which he later refines as meaningless (straw). Dried voices are useless, while whispering together implies strength in numbers, which he then refines as collectively impotent. Eliot then juxtaposes the soft sound of wind in the grass with the violent nature of glass on the feet (never mind that they’re the rats). Add to that the wind being meaningless. How empty do you have to be before you realize you’re emotionally/spiritually desolate in the postwar era?
How to Use Juxtaposition
To effectively use juxtaposition in your poetry, start by identifying the key themes or images you want to explore. Think about how placing opposing elements side by side could enhance or complicate these themes. Experiment with different combinations of poetic devices to see how they interact on the page. Interesting places to use juxtaposition include:
Imagery
This is probably the most common usage of juxtaposition. By contrasting two distinct images, poets can evoke a range of emotions or create a more vivid picture in the reader’s mind.
Audre Lorde uses juxtaposition to explore oppression by contrasting the mythical and the real world in “The Black Unicorn.”
Different Perspectives
Juxtaposition can also be used to explore different perspectives of a concept or idea. By comparing opposing ideas, a poet can give the reader a deeper understanding of a specific emotion or concept.
For example, in "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening," Robert Frost juxtaposes the serene, still atmosphere of the woods with the undertone of abandoning responsibilities. This contrast reveals the narrator's inner turmoil, who is caught between the allure of peaceful solitude and life's obligations.
Theme
Beyond imagery, juxtaposition can also contrast themes or ideas within a poem. By placing two opposing concepts side by side, poets can explore complex relationships. This can be particularly effective in poems that deal with conflicting emotions, such as love and hate, hope and despair, or freedom and confinement.
In Seamus Heaney’s poem "The Cure at Troy," Heaney juxtaposes the concept of hope with the relentless passage of time, placing both in a timeless context. This juxtaposition creates cognitive conflict, forcing the reader to wrap their head around “hope” beyond the constraints of time.
In "The Tradition" by Jericho Brown, the poet juxtaposes the beauty of nature with the violence of historical and ongoing racial oppression, highlighting the stark contrast between the natural world and human cruelty.
Tone and Mood
Juxtaposition isn’t just about content—it can also influence the tone and mood of a poem. By placing a light, whimsical tone next to a darker, more serious one, poets can create a sense of unease or irony. This technique leads to a layered reading experience as the reader navigates different emotional responses.
For example, in "We Real Cool" by Gwendolyn Brooks, the playful tone of the pool hall players is juxtaposed with the dark reality of their lives, hinted at in the abrupt final line. This contrast between tone and content enhances the poem’s commentary. Jack Gilbert’s "A Brief for the Defense" juxtaposes the world's harsh realities with moments of beauty and love, creating a tension between despair and hope throughout the poem.
Structure
Poets can also use the structure of their poems to create juxtaposition. This might involve contrasting short, abrupt lines with longer, flowing ones or placing stark, declarative statements next to softer, more questioning lines. The physical arrangement of these elements on the page can mirror the thematic contrasts within the poem.
In yet another T.S. Eliot example, "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock," he uses fragmented structure to juxtapose different voices, settings, and ideas, reflecting a fragmented sense of self. The shifts in tone and imagery contribute to the poem’s overall sense of dislocation. "Road Music" by Richard Siken uses this same fragmented approach, combining chaotic lines with more structured, lyrical passages that reflect the internal conflict and emotional turmoil of the narrator.
Strengthen Your Juxtaposition Skills
The next time you craft a poem, don’t leave your contrasting ideas at their base level. Instead, consider how more effective comparisons could impart greater depth, meaning, and clarity. Could you opt to use different language? What about adding in another poetic device? What could you change about your structure or line breaks to change the tone and atmosphere or provide additional complexity? Remember, it is about the dynamic interplay between the differences, not the differences themselves. Strengthening your juxtaposition skills might open up new avenues of expression and create a new connection with your readers.
Additional Poetry Terms Used In This Newsletter
Imagery: descriptive or figurative language that creates vivid pictures in the reader’s mind, often appealing to the senses.
Perspectives: various angles or viewpoints within a poem.
Theme: the underlying message or central idea that a poet explores through their work.
Tone: the attitude or approach that the poet takes towards the poem’s theme or subject matter.
Mood: the emotional feeling created by a poem. It is influenced by word choice, imagery, and structure.
Structure: the overall organization of a poem, including its length, stanza arrangement, and line breaks.
Fragmented Structure: A poetic structure that is intentionally broken or disjointed, often to reflect a fragmented or chaotic state of mind.
Poetic Devices: Techniques used by poets to add depth to their writing, including metaphor, simile, personification, and alliteration. In the context of juxtaposition, these devices can be combined or contrasted to enhance the impact of the poem.
Line Breaks: Points in a poem where the line ends, creating a pause that affects rhythm and emphasis.
Cognitive Conflict: A mental struggle or conflict that arises when contrasting ideas or concepts are presented together, forcing the reader to reconcile the differences or understand the tension between them.
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