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This week: Do You Have a Sweet Tooth? Edited by: Leger~  
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Do You Have a Sweet Tooth?
A fun way of thinking about the structure of a short story is like baking a birthday cake. It's sweet, it's delicious...but you have to remember to not get carried away.
The main layers of the cake is the story structure. Having solid characters, a steady story arc and a reliable world in which they operate is essential. But like a cake, a short story can't have too many layers or it will topple. Layers upon layers atop one another or stacked next to each other means you've gone too wordy and built a novel wedding cake. While that's fine, it's not a short story. Go with a few simple layers and build from there.
Next is the filling between the layers. Those are the interesting idiosyncrasies of the characters or the luscious setting. Too many flavors in the layers and it turns into rainbow tutti-frutti and your reader will become distracted and confused. Keep it unique and uncomplicated.
Last is the icing. This is your wonderful hook at the beginning of the story and your fantastic ending. It doesn't always have to be a happy ending but it has to satisfy your reader. Leaving a little for the reader to imagine is always a delicious treat. Too much icing, glitter, candles and sparklers will have everyone jumping back and walking away dazed and confused. Trimming to the best parts of the story is recommended.
Work toward making your story simple, delicious and elegant. I guarantee your readers will be back for another taste. Write on!
This month's question: What tips can you offer others for keeping your story simple?
How do you use that in your writing?
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This month's question: What tips can you offer others for keeping your story simple?
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