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Something's amiss in Santa's workshop - Writer's Cramp Winning Entry
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo!
I was looking for Holiday themed pieces to review and found this Cramp Winner!

Here goes:
1. The title, brief description, genres and cover picture work perfectly.
2. You hook the reader right from the first word!
3. I like the idea of his wife calling him 'San'! *Smile*
4. I looked up 'MEE' and couldn't find it, Google kept insisting I meant MEET. As the story progressed, I found out why I couldn't find it! *Rolling*
5. I love how you've brought the prompt words into the story, especially the Message Blocked, yarn company and railway strike.
6. I like 'D' standing for 'Delivery'!
7. You've woven in tradition and modernity seamlessly, as the tale unfolds.
8. The little elf speaking up is a lovely touch.
9. The conclusion is smooth and the 'bumper sticker' is cute!
10. No suggestions, it works as it is!

Brilliant take on the given prompt! *ThumbsUpR*
Write On,
Sonali

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