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 The last train Open in new Window. [E]
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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An interesting piece. A woman waits for the last train of the night. However, when she gets on, things become strange. Instead of seeing the usual trees and houses, she ends up seeing things and places from her past. Then, she ends up seeing the crowd at the destination, which is filled with those she hasn't seen in years and years.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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