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 | Tree House  [E] Eight line poem  |
| (4.5)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY!!! from "Anniversary Reviews"  Celebrating your writing this month with a review. Happy Account Anniversary Sumojo I remember this prompt from say it in eight and noted what kind of structure that was, for hunting, but imagined it could be used by children in the summer as a great tree house. Your poem is very nostalgic and makes me reminisce, as I'm sure many others will we they see it. What I find relatable about this poem is this will to find alone time, either with the books or with one's imagination. It's great when you're a kid because life's problems aren't hanging over you. This poem makes a reader feel that freedom, without worry. I feel it takes us into that loft to experience the very same feelings. The pastural nature of the poem is succinctly signified by that moment offered in the first line of the second verse, when lulled to sleep by the sheep. The connotation of counting to fall asleep, notwithstanding, is considered by this reader. I did wonder about the end. I thought maybe a search would begin, as it felt this was way past supper time or bed, but that's just from a feeling that arose that left me a bit suspended and wondering if this boy will make it home, at least without a scolding. This was a pleasant read and enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing, Brian WDC Account Anniversary and Angel Army Reviewer    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/02/2024 @ 1:53am EDT