Hi Crissy,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with joy and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the presence of The Holy Spirit in your life and how it connects you with God. I have a deep belief in God and invite Him into my life everyday. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works very well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.