Hi AmyJo,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with regret. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who regrets not telling someone they love them after the death of the person they love. I am hoping that the speaker will find peace in their life. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.