Hello, Anders J. Miller!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

Wow! You wrote a fantastic poem about the sky over the ocean turning from dark to light in the morning.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I read this poem sometime in the past and loved it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "August" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You engaged my senses and I could envision the scenes as I read this lovely nature poem of yours.

I was happy to see it has already received four reviews with an average of five stars. My review will make it five and I'll definitely give you five stars. You did a great job.

My favorite line was: "Bright silver dances across the ocean's end," as it felt particularly pretty to me.

I loved the ending / summary / conclusion.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your nature poem.

I thought the nature genres you selected was perfect for this poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

I wouldn't change your poem. I would suggest that if you used a form, that you add a note section to tell us what the form was. If you created a new form, that'd be good to know too. The repeating lines made me think it was a form poem but I wasn't sure. That thought kept intruding as I read the poem, wondering if it was a form or not. So it might help other future readers to have that information there for them. It's just my opinion though, take it or leave it, as best serves you, of course.


CONCLUSION:
You have a lovely writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your nature poem.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 


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